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After much prodding Luna has finally managed to convince her since to sit down and talk over tea and discuss their mutual grievances.

But can Corona let go of whatever makes her, her so easily?

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Is the cover art El Chavos hat!:rainbowhuh:

6219376 It was meant to be a reference to Catcher in the Rye.

Oops... if I get it right what the wet splashing sounds were, I'm not surprised Celestia became a little too protective. After all, seeing petrified bits of ponies turn back to flesh would surely turn more than one stomach... Also, your Discord seems really well written.

At the beginning I was a little confused in regards to who exactly is Corona, but now it's all clear. Noticed some typos here and there, I can comb for them through the story if you wish:pinkiesmile:

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El Chavos hat seems to be a deer stalker, so, in a way, kind of? I meant it to be a Catcher in the Rye thing back when I wrote this.

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Thanks for the offer, I wouldn't mind some help with typos I didn't catch back when I wrote this.

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