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MythrilMoth
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MythrilMoth
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He's called Spike for a reason. This sounds painful.
I laughed more than I should have...
Um...nice sex story?
I'm sorry, but the Lyra one was better.
I'm honestly surprised that he didn't agree when I read that scene. Another Pet Peeve, or is it just me?
I.....don't know what to say.
Cute story
The only thing I didn't like about this story was that it was so short. To me, there should be more detail. Maybe you could do a sequel where Rainbow Dash agrees not to tell anypony on the condition that Twilight and Spike let her join them in a threesome. LOL
4921311 It was meant to be more comedy than clop.
As for Spike not immediately agreeing, it's because he saw that for the despicable bullshit ploy it was.
4921414 I didn't really want to drag it out too much, because it's just too silly and stupid. I wanted to get this one out of the way and move on.
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Haw. I guess I kinda like romance more than comedy. More heart warming. Eh.
I guess you're right about the bullshit ploy.
That was kind of funny but mostly absurd.
Heh.
I told people years ago that Spike is the perfect sex toy! In a species of ruminants, his accessorized tail, nimble claws, and foot-long tongue all promise that mares will be flocking to him after he's done with puberty.
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And yet we still can't be sure if he has an actual penis.
As soon as twilight said she was afraid of penises, I cracked up.
Do clop fics ever get old to anyone? Or is it just me? It was well written and all, not saying this was a bad piece, just not all that... interesting.
Ha! That was brilliant! From the shortish word count, I could tell it wasn't going to get too in-depth, and for the story, it works here. Somehow, I can see them both acting the way they did.
Can't tell if stab at a cliche which I'm guilty of using or being the premise of a joke.
I'm just here for Twilight's booty in the cover art.
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A little of both.
Well that was 20% I don't know
He has connections in the fashion industry, Twilight. You don't want to know what they get up to.
In any case, this was... bizarre. I'm going to go with bizarre. I don't know what you've been smoking, Moth, but I don't want any.
Bravo! i enjoyed that
any chance for more? maybe Twilight and the girls can see Spike use his 10 ft long prehensile tongue and get some ideas 
4922581 I doubt I'm going to revisit this idea. This was just a one-off bit of silliness.
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aww... i was hoping for more Splight :
4922610 That's what Hot For Sister is for.
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then get to work! *whips MythrilMoth to write faster*
4922728 Actually, there IS a chapter of that coming either tonight or tomorrow.
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4921881 He's the only male in Equestria for whom the lack of external genitalia would do nothing to hurt his eligibility.
4922909 By which you mean he's naive, nonthreatening, and easily friendzoned.
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4923093 Just stating the facts. I know the truth hurts, but let's be honest here.
Doesn't make Spike any less fun.
With the claws, tail, and two dragon hoods it's like 5x the pleasure-orgasm.
says the mare that barges into other pony's bedrooms without asking...
PS couldn't he have asked for a little stimulation, himself, along with helping her again?
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I don't blame her, penises are horrifying creatures.
You should write a bonus chapter where Twilight writes a friendship report to Celestia about this... Her reaction would be priceless!
4923306 yeah! Seems like a pretty bad deal for him. He should get some action as well, only fair,
4922778 wow really
Oook...
!?
After the two great and funny stories you did with, Spike and Trixie, I can honestly say I was disappointed with this.
And I LOVE Spilight!
4922982 sad truth
WHY?! Spoilsort! ;)
P.S.
Nitpick:
- There are
4927427 Your nitpick would be valid in narrative, but that's dialogue. Characters don't always use grammatically correct language.
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As I said to other author before - I kind of treat fic like I treat books - and those don't have inappropriate grammar (accents aside) most times.
It is simply distracting for me and it looks sloppy on author's side IMHO - there are other more subtle ways to imply that characters use informal language.
And when spoken by Twilight it looks really OOC - she finished something better than public school... Nor would she, in my mind, accept such errors from Spike.
4927460 You know, I'm a stickler for grammar as well, to the point where I've been called a grammar nazi left, right, and sideways...but you're testing MY patience.
There really aren't.
(Also, you must never have read Stephen King, J.K. Rowling, Terry Pratchett, J.R.R. Tolkein...)
...
That was a new one I guess.
Funny ending is funny and appreciated.
I dunno, Rainbow. That could actually be the best friendship report ever! I'd love to see Celestia's response.
Most excellent story!
4960954 im pretty sure that just made twilight a sexual predator, you know since spike is school age
5054822 But he's also her Number 1, Personal Assisstant. I'm sure the punishment would be light.
5054915 too late for a light punishment. I got him on the way
*twilight hears a knock on the door and opens it*
Hello im chris hansen from nbc's dateline. May I come in
5055018 .....Damn.
Someone needs to make this a fic!!!