• Published 27th Apr 2012
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The test of harmony - Uzlesniz Savage



When a strange pony steals celestia, its up to the elements to get her back.

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Chapter 11

AUTHOR'S NOTES
This was my first and favorite so far. I enjoyed writing this to the fullest extent of my power. I know at some times it feels rush and I apologize for that. There are alot if errors grammatical and in language, but there is nothing I can do about this, considering I am typing this on my mom's tablet. It is how I write and I know it sucks. My brother keeps telling me to write differently, and its hard, but in my new story, I write in alot more detail and it just send better. This will always be my favorite story of mine, just cause it was my first, and so far, my best stat wise. I hope ask of you put there readin' this will wait to see what i have in store for you. Enjoy writin' and keep readin'

Comments ( 8 )

Hey, If youread this it would be much appreciated if you coment and/or like/dislike the story so I can help fix my other stories:scootangel:
Thanx and keep readin':eeyup:

Put some DisLestia up in this story bro. Discord x Celestia fan here. But yea pretty good but try making the stories a bit longer or combining two chapters into one. Just my opinion.

1055865. Thanx. For commenting by the way, and i couldnt put dilestia in there. It didnt fit tthe story line well, but anyhoof. I thought about doing that, but i didnt no where to combine the chapters and. I thoughtt about adding more, but never got around to it...:pinkiecrazy: rhanx for the advice..:pinkiehappy:

1058981 ha, by the way, cool profile photo:pinkiecrazy:

Thanks yours is awesome as well. :pinkiehappy:

Thanks yours is awesome as well. :pinkiehappy:

1073499 thanx, maybe you could join ma group:pinkiecrazy: if you want:twilightsmile:

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