"If only I had known then what I know now. Maybe I would have acted differently. Maybe I could have stopped Pinkie from leaving. But there's no way I could have known. The mystery that is Pinkie Pie could never be so easy to figure out. She'd been lying to us all along, hiding who she really was. Maybe she'd always planned to just disappear from our lives for good. But there's one thing I do know, no matter who or what she may really be, she'll always be that silly pony who surprises me when I read in the Library, who threw me a Welcome party when I first came to Ponyville, and who will always be one of my dear friends. And I'll be damned if I don't show her where she really belongs. With her friends."
Note: This story takes place before Twilight becomes a alicorn but after Discord has been reformed.
Edited by: Soto Konoha
Proofread by: Garbo802
So what EXACTLY is this? Something like Seeing the Pattern or Jekyl and Hyde? Can you give me something to compare this to?
Basically it's based on the @askpinamenadianepie on tumblr, pinkamena is basically a murder/molester/torturer
4919533 Actually its not based on the blog ha ha
4919211 Hmmm I wouldn't quite say Jekyll and Hide. But thats a good starting point
That's pretty awesome :D
4929804 Thanks!
The disappearance of Haruhi Suzumiya? eh? Eh? please tell me you know that... because that s the vibe I'm getting here... and IF so I really want to read it.
4954694 Ha ha I do in fact known what you are talking about! And I will say they have some similar qualities but are not related in any way. I do hope you'd still like to read it though
4954711 ああ。。そうか！ Well then that's not a problem, I'm going to get around to it when I'm not doing Japanese homework, I always wanted to have Twilight have the same amount of Snark Kyon uses, but it's fine
ありがとう。
4954750 I use to study Japanese myself ha ha! And oh so have I trust me, lol
どう いたしまして！
that's right, twilight! it is all your fault! you, and your idiotic friends!
wow, this twilight is a spineless cry-baby.
4974810 I just tend to see as when shes going into a situation she has no idea how to deal with she kinda loses it. But I can definitely see your point.
4974938 yeah, i get where you'r coming from. that's why i like the bad-ass twilight stories, since that's how i prefer her to act.
4975034 I understand. I love Badass Twilight myself XD This Twilight just fit my story better ha ha. Have you read Hard Reset? Thats one of my FAVORITE Twilights.
4975072 i loved that story! are you a member of the 'Badass Twilight = Total Domination' group?
4975175 Uh no But I totally should be! Excuse me while I go find this group immediately
4975191 i put the exact name down, so it should be easier to find. and if not, then just look for Hard Reset and search for it in the groups that it's part of.
4975201 Found it and just by looking at it I know its gotta be awesome
4975217 Hope you enjoy it!
4975238 Thanks will do!
*claps hooves* Well made my friend, I love it that you put the Pies aren't her real family. I really didn't expect that. Btw is there going to be shipping between the Mane 6? For example: Twilight X Pinkie Pie and Applejack X Rainbow Dash.
Awesome! This is amazingly written. I wouldn't be able towright like this
Can wait for next chapter ^w^
Interesting, doubly so that Pinkie knows some personal family stories. Maybe the family isn't a complete dead end and Pinkie, while not related, did at one point meet one of the pie daughters and heard the stories from them. At the very least she had to have some source of information for the stories. I am guessing in this story the "Maud Pie" episode isn't canon, or else it would be obvious that Maud knows something and is willing to pretend Pinkie is her sister, which I doubt the characters would have been able to miss.
Edit: that or it would be like the disappearance of Haruhi Suzumiya, Except instead of only one person remembering, multiple ponies still remember (as the cakes remembered when Twilight and friend asked and they said they didn't even realize Pinkie left).
Perhaps her existence doesn't hold permanence, and you slowly forget about her the longer you are away, and objects relating to her, such as pictures, reality are altered as time goes on to erase her existence.
Random theorizing doesn't help much though, at least not this early in the game, so to speak, as there isn't quite enough to narrow down the options even a little.
HA! at least this twilight isn't blinded by her teachers facade. so she's not that bad, just a bit of a cry-baby. and she's straight. that's kind of a let down, but not a serious one.
All these years and Celestia is STILL a troll...
Car? Why did you write Car?
5173073 Its a train car. She was talking about shooting him out the side of the train car.
Is good. I'm assuming you have personal experience with MREs?
5317767 Lol I had to eat them for a month straight in combat training
And... Tyrant-memes. *sad sigh* Such hope, dashed away, it seems, for a conspiracy story without Celestia being a backstabber.
5476345 Sorry to have disappointed you.
*Spoilers*
Though to be fair Celestia is not really a tyrant. She gave one of the most powerful villains Equestria had known a chance to live in Equestria as a pony and spent 800 years trying to find a way to permanently seal away the chaos in Eris. However due to the recent disappearance and such she no longer had all the time in the world to research this and had to act on split decisions to do what was best for the country. She may not want to have to destroy Eris, but she has very little other choice. Just as when she had to Banish Luna. I will admit that the story portrays her as a evil figure but the story is also through Twilight eyes who is feeling hurt and deceived by one of the ponies she trusted most.
I like this story so far so I will be tracking it.
Twilight got dusted... Man this is a good story, I wish to see future updates one day.
How come you haven't continued this?
TROLOLOLOLOLOLOOLOLOLOLOLOL THEYRE BOTH TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
IMA GNAW THEIR BLOODY ARMS OF AND THROWUM DOWN THE FREAKING WELL, YA LITTLE BEEP BEEEP BEEEP GO TO BEEEEEEEP HELL BEFORE I BEEEEEEEEEPPPPPP[PPPPPPPPPPP THE BEEEEEEEP OUT OF THEM
Oh lord...Twilight just fought Celestia...
Twilight just fought Celestia.
Twilight...just...fought...Celestia!
My world just crashed around my ears and came to an end.
Twilight...Celestia...fought...oh my lord....
Do you ever intend to continue this?
Cancelled, a true shame. Was really enjoying it.