Prologue: The Request
"Fluttershy, I said I was sorry!" Discord flashed out of existence and suddenly his head and neck appeared popping out of a flower along her path. "Please listen!" Fluttershy continued trotting down the path, attempting to pay the draconequus no mind. She was totally overreacting; all he had done was help an old friend ally acquaintance. Discord flashed again, this time inside the logo on the side of a passing cart.
"I never meant to hurt anypony! I was just having fun, honest!" He reappeared in front of her as a young multicolored hound, looking up at her with pleading puppy-dog eyes that no mortal being could possibly resist. Tears glistened at the corners of his eyes, and he stuck out his bottom lip like an adorable little foal.
"Well, you did," said Fluttershy softly, on the brink of tears. "You hurt me." The dam burst and she galloped away sobbing, leaving Discord hanging his head in shame. His terribly enjoyable pout was suddenly interrupted by a call from above.
"Hey, Discord!" yelled the mailmare from the sky. "Letter for ya!" Discord looked up to see a gray pegasus hovering unsteadily a few yards above his head. Her mane was messily wrapped around her head, making her look like a ragdoll. The chaos in Discord briefly wondered how she would look in a rainbow-colored afro, but it was overpowered for the moment by Discord's conscious thoughts.
A letter? For him? He had to see this as quickly as possible! He snapped the digits of his lion paw and the pegasus was now suddenly an earth pony. She plummeted to the ground, but Discord decided to give her a break and willed the ground beneath her to become spongy.
After curling up in fear, the mare bounced once, her distorted eyes glazed over with confusion, not realizing that she was saved purely by Discord's good will. At the peak of her arc, Discord calmly reached over with his eagle claw and plucked the letter out of her mouth. She then fell to the ground, now back to its original rigidity, and Discord decided to give her her wings back.
The envelope was dripping with slobber, but that was to be expected from being held in a pony's mouth. Discord carefully opened the envelope with his claw and read the following text:
Dear Discord,
You are hereby called to the personal audience of Princess Celestia of Equestria in the main hall of Canterlot Castle. You are required to arrive at precisely 3 o' clock on the afternoon of September the 1st of the 1004th year of Celestia's reign. Do NOT be late.
Sincerely,
Fire Quill, Personal Secretary of Her Majesty Princess Celestia
Discord? Late? Never!
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"Where is he?" Twilight tapped her hoof impatiently on the castle floor.
"Patience, Twilight," replied Celestia. Equestria's main Princess was obviously trying and failing to maintain her composure as she thought about how attractive Discord was. She would never admit it, but Discord knew that she still had a thing for him. "I have confidence that he will arrive soon."
Of course, Discord would arrive whenever he wanted to, but he chose that specific moment for its wonderful comedic timing.
"Hel~lo, everypony!" Discord flashed into existence, then looked around and realized that only two ponies were there; the Princesses Celestia and Twilight Sparkle. Luna must have been in her chamber sleeping; possibly doing other things, but most likely sleeping. The lazy mare never got off her plot during the day, Discord knew.
"Hello, Discord," said Celestia, obviously unable to keep the slight undertone of attraction out of her voice. "How have you been?" Discord knew what she actually meant, but he decided to play along, to keep up the charade in front of Twilight. One would not want to make the most powerful mage in Equestria jealous.
"Oh, just great, Celestia," he said with deliberately over-the-top enthusiasm. "In fact, I rather think things are going quite..." With a flash he turned into a fish inside an aquarium. "...swimmingly," he finished, flourishing his fishy body. Twilight scowled at him and he turned back to his regular form.
"Now, now, Twilight," he said, holding up his mismatched forelimbs and shrugging, "please try to be patient with me. All that chaos and randomness will eventually work itself out of my system enough so that I can listen. It'll just take a minute or two."
"Like the way it exited your system when Tirek stabbed you in the back and stole it after you betrayed us?"
"Twilight!" The lavender alicorn flinched and shrunk under Celestia's voice. Discord, of course, felt nothing upon Twilight's remark. Nope, nothing. Absolutely no crushing feelings of guilt whatsoever.
"Discord," said Celestia, "I have ordered you here because I have a request."
"Oh, Celly, I'm afraid you can't marry me; what would Luna think?" Celestia continued, unfazed. Darn.
"You have taken your reform remarkably well; aside from the incident with Tirek," she added when Twilight gave her the stink eye. "However, you are still a drain on the country's resources, however small. You must repay the favor and give back to the community by earning a working wage."
"A job?" Discord could not believe his ears. He was going to have to work? Earn money doing manual labor?
"Yes," replied Celestia. "A job. For normal citizens, there is a long and tedious application process; however, as you are technically a charge of the crown, the process will be much more streamlined. Otherwise, you will still be held under the same requirements as other citizens.
"Twilight here will be your agent. She will be responsible for speaking to or, if need be, negotiating with, your prospective employers, keeping track of your work schedule, and helping you decide which job you would like to apply for.
"For now, you will be applying for jobs within Ponyville so that Twilight and her friends can better keep an eye on you. Twilight?" Celestia stepped aside, allowing Twilight to stand in front of Discord. She lit her horn and conjured a three-ring binder, which was the same brown as his main coat, containing a mind-boggling number of papers and folders.
"I have already decided on three possible jobs in Ponyville. These dividers are for your future paychecks and status reports, sorted by date, and these folders will be for your applications. These spreadsheets will be for your weekly work schedule, and on these pages, I will be graphing the number of hours you work every day to track your progress. Everything will be three-hole punched in order to fit in the binder. Any questions?"
"What does this symbol on the front mean?" asked the draconequus, pointing at the proper spot.
"That's a coffee stain that was left by Pinkie," Twilight said flatly. "By the time I noticed it, it was too late for me to go and buy another binder."
"Ah-ha-ha!" laughed Discord. "That is hilarious!" He fell onto his back and kicked his legs in the air.
"Ahem." Twilight cleared her throat impatiently. "If you're done, we should not waste any time." Discord nodded and teleported them back to Ponyville with a flick of his eyebrow.
"Oh, Twilight," he said, "you can be such a drag sometimes. So serious. Where's your sense of fun?"
"On a bookshelf in my library, which, if you hadn't noticed, was recently obliterated. Now if you don't mind, I'd like for us to start as soon as possible." Discord thought he heard her mumble "The sooner we start, the sooner it'll be over" under her breath, but surely he must have been hearing things.
"So," said Discord, cracking his knuckles and causing a bush in front of him to randomly sneeze, "what's first on the list?"
Looks to be good xD
Can't wait to see some more of this. It seems like it'll be pretty good. Though I wonder what he did to fluttershy :(
unless it's the tirek thing, though it sounds like something new. Not sure.
anyway, keep it up! /)
Potential...
I had a similar idea but Discord ended up being a bus driver.
The ONE thing I have a problem with is that, when you look at how they treat Discord at the end of the Tirek episode, they really shouldn't be holding it against him, as, in the episode, it seemed like they forgave him. Other than that, I think this has potential.
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This story begins a few days after the battle with Tirek. I will elaborate further next chapter.
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In my canon, it's only Twilight that's giving him a hard time, but that may change in the future.
EDIT: I think I may have retconned Discord's relationship with the Mane 6 a teensy bit. Please bear with me as I attempt to fix it without abandoning my vision for the story.
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Well what I meant was, is Fluttershy still upset with him about the betrayal with Tirek? Or did he do something new to make her sad/angry since that?
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As for them giving him a hard time seeming out of character, I can still see Twilight being miffed about it, given that the adrenaline and magic has worn off since the fight and she had time to think clearer about what transpired. Fluttershy was close, so we can see her being hurt a bit even if she forgave him, and Twilight never trusted him anyway. That's my reasoning/opinion on the emotions in this story right now.
Here are a few job ideas;
-mercenary
-work at barnyard bargains
-teachers assistant
-weather patrol
Ouch!
Well, won't this be interesting. It certainly will!
Do continue please
If you want suggestions for jobs to Discord...
Foalsitter: Discord taking care of the CMC and other fillies and colts.
Princess: Why not? He can have wings and a horn if he want, and like that Celestia and Luna can have a vacation
Thief: He can take what he wants without problem
Sugar Cube Corner: Why not work in there with Pinkie? He can make a excellent chocolate rain
General: Discord need you for the army
History Teacher: Who is better that someone that is almost as old as Celestia and Luna to teach history?
Lab Experiment: Twilight can tie him in a table and experiment with the chaos magic in Discord.
Decorator: Well, he can redecorate your house very easy, and chaos is the best this season.
Librarian: After Tirek destroyed Ponyville library, they need another, and Twilight is now a Princess so the job is free.
Cleaner: He can clean dust with a maid outfit, and even clean the brains and the memory of something that happened
And I could tell a couple more.
This looks very interesting. I think it would be funny to see Discord as a teacher. Better still, if he hated his class. Ooh, what if he had to teach Diamond Tiara? Sorry, I'll shut up. But this story looks very interesting, and I cannot wait for the next chapter. So if it doesn't come out soon... (Menancing laugh)
Anyway, this time I will really shut up.
Loving the unreliable narrator. As for Discordant antics, you're doing a pretty good job, but you can't really force that kind of thing. Try to visualize Discord as he converses, treating his shape as just another aspect of his expression. It doesn't have to be funny per se, just chaotic. (This, of course, means it will be funny to Discord, if not for anyone else. Cf. Derpy's impromptu trampoline session.)
Honestly, I can't blame Twilight for holding a grudge. Discord was responsible for enabling one of the biggest threats she's ever faced. One that blew up her home, no less.
Looking forward to more. Especially what Discord did to Fluttershy.
I read this premise and I couldn't help but see the episode of "Amazing World of Gumball". Where Richard got a job as a pizza delivery man. I can see "Ms. Mom's" speach to Anise as Twilight saying it to Celestia.
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I already started writing the history teacher bit. All your other ideas sound really good though.
Well, here are my ideas:
-Hatter. He is mad. So he should be a hatter.
-He should open a sandwich-shop with really crazy sandwichs.
For example: Hunter's Delight: A sandwich that flees from it's plate, and the customer has to hunt it down before eating.
Random Special: Every bite tastes completely different, and the tastes are also completely random (Like these beans in Harry Potter).
Chaos Light Lite: An edible light-show. Nothing but light.
Fire Alarm: A tiny sandwich for breakfast. Like two dozen cups of strong coffee mixed with a heap of jalapenos.
After eating this, you are awake. Definitely.
-He also could open a fun park. A roller-coaster designed by Discord would be epic.
-Oh, and he could work in the weather patrol. This would fail, of course. Fail hilariously.
This seams injoyable!
The sentence, "Equestria's main Princess was obviously trying and failing to maintain her composure as she thought about how hot Discord was," was so out of place that I was actually like, 'what....is he sweaty or something..? O- OH!'
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Corrected to improve understandability. Thanks for mentioning that.
I like the utter unreliability of Discord's narration. Good start.