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The DM


Dungeon Master (DM) - the organizer and participant in charge of creating the details and challenges of a given adventure, while maintaining a realistic continuity of events.

Comments ( 17 )

What... what did we write...?

4916524 you need to get back to work on your stories. :trollestia:

I knew the narrator was... something different the moment I read that second paragraph, so I didn't find the ending absurd. What kept me going was wondering what that something was. I could list my guesses, some of which are perhaps stranger than the real answer, but that would spoil it for the people who are reading this before they've read the story. I know you're out there.

At first I was confused. Some of the language got me turned around, but after the last sentence, it all came together. An interesting piece of work.

This is like a greentext made large. Very nicely done.

Oh wow didn't see that one coming.I thought it was a pony getting tortured and beaten.Nicely done! :rainbowlaugh:

....wow. That's new.

You missed a few categories. I would add in Tragedy for her siblings dyeing and Gore for.........you should know. I might also take out the slice of life category, because that's usually based around for everyday things like a small argument or going in town etc. etc. Just my thoughts though. :twilightsmile:

I sort of like this story, but the thought of Coudkicker just getting beat up and tortured left to right doesn't make any sense to me. Actually........Discord said what fun is there in making sense.......................................................................................................................................well played Discord...well played............

5588165 Uhhhh... Cloudkicker isn't the one getting beaten.

5588934 wait wuh.....I thought that's who the main character was!!!!!!! :facehoof: you're joking....right?

5589711 Did you read the last line of the story?

Oh well, such is the life of a simple rain cloud.

Cloudchaser is the one DOING the abusing.

5589729 ........:rainbowderp:....I thought that meant that was an average day for Cloudkicker and she was getting abused.............it's just how it looked like to me. To me, that seemed to seem like it was saying getting abused and tortured was an average day for Cloudkicker....

5589794 Yup. The whole story is from the perspective of a raincloud

5589822 :twilightoops: ....this story is about a raincloud?!?! I thought it was about a living, breathing pony getting tortured left to right!!!!! I thought what you said at the very end was like some metaphor or something! I feel so stupid right now. :facehoof: But then again, I always feel stupid...I feel stupider right now....

5589847 Whole thing. Raincloud. Hence why there is no dialogue. :trollestia:

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