• Member Since 15th Feb, 2014
  • offline last seen Tuesday

EPP


T
Source

Starburst got invited to one of her friends girl talk, she didn't think that anything good can come out from this.

Well she was right more or less.

Short FanFic which is more or less a prequel to Guy Talk


Dad Talk

Once again almost all characters used in the story were created by kilala97 if by any chance you still didn't check out her deviantart, go do it now.

Seriously it's awesome.


Now with a reading!

Chapters (1)
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!
Comments ( 16 )

Cool, this was cute and fun to read :) good job man

Cute and funny, well done. :twilightsmile:

Love this. A fun read and always funny to read/see starburst get flustered.

Nice story. Nice job, pointing to StarFall.

I love this story. Nice reference to "When the Stars Align."

I am not denying this is a good story and deserves to be where it is but... 25 likes:rainbowhuh:...in the feature box.. what! what! Can someone please ? I just I I I....
Grahficcqnkjdjbwjsjxk!|\®>¡~®¡\*=&%46'+\gf#dDDXGkKLnBVV€%%%¿¿\&£|»¥*®<{¿~\¢¢©/!"$@
(Finish smacking head on keyboard)
What?! :pinkiecrazy:

Ooooooh, nice ending. wink wink :raritywink::raritywink: nudge nudge:heart:

Dan

We need more next-generation fics.

A pity Time-traveling Kids of the Mane 6 seems to have stalled out. Also, she may be a bit of a bratty teen, but I kind of like Princess Nidra. She'll go far.

This looks suspiciously like the description of the image on deviantart...

Great now I'm wondering if there will be a followup to this story:derpytongue2:

Yeah I saw that Starfall reference.

A minor correction:

Suddenly Candy turned towards Starburst with her usual happy smile “Hey sorry for all the teasing about Prism Star.”

There should be a comma between Prism and Star (names in direct address should be set off by commas). As it's currently written, she's saying they're teasing about someone named "Prism Star."

EPP

4951789 Yeah thanks for pointing that out I somehow missed it.

We're nidra Luna's daughter

“Huh a Starfall, I mean falling star, oh whatever.” Starburst sighed and stood up walking back to her room, she laid down in her bed and closed her eyes, not knowing that somewhere out there was her Star.

i'm just checking if this was a reference to Stars In The Making?

Login or register to comment
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!