MUSTARD IS BEST PONY. MUSTARD GOES WELL WITH ANYTHING. MUSTARD IS TART AND DISGUSTING ON ITS OWN.
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Oh Mustard, I could never be mad with you.
You write so well and so fluently...
*Sniff* I'm so proud...
IT'S Back
Dude, for all you specialize in porn, to see a solid story from you that so happens to ALSO have porn? Sign me right the fuck up!
Are you at all related to the great BunnyMustard?
Interesting!
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I AM NOT AND THIS OTHER MUSTARD IS INFERIOR
POINT ME TO THEM SO I MAY ASSERT MY DOMINANCE
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LOOK, I'M TALKING LIKE YOU!
Hah! Oblivious Celestia.
And so it continues....
Is... is it bad that I hope he ends up railing Celestia? Because I hope he ends up railing Celestia.
Also, great first chapter, you did good job of setting up the rest of story. The pacing felt really good here.
CHANGELING!!!
or
MULTIPLE LUNAS!
EITHER WAY, I APPROVE.
4946967 You forgot one theory... LUNACEPTION.
The funniest this about this chapter was the fact that there was a 'Bad Dragon' ad at the bottom
Don't dragons have more than one 'dragon hood'?
Well, that was a fun chapter.
Your going to want to fix that.
Also, just call them dragon scales or something. Calling him a reptile just sounds insulting.
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*YOU'RE
LET'S SEE YOU TYPE A CHAPTER ON YOUR PHONE THIS WELL.
4948450 I'll have you know, Sir, I would use my tablet. My phone is too small.
That parting line tho!!!
Well...This will set ponies to talking
Seeing some actual proof Celestia isn't just trying to keep him on a leash would be nice. Her words may say one thing, bur her demenor says something else entirely.
Also, TwilicornXSpike OTP
Um...You wrote "beagel", and I think you meant "bagel".
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WHO SAYS SHE ISN'T
4948450 I.type all my stories on my phone
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IT SHOWS.
...you know, it's times like these that make me realize WHY Twi was always going nuts when Celestia was involved. Moreover, this also leaves me to think that poor Spike may or may not have his own Smarty Pants incident...though HOW is completely up in the air.
Nice job on the chapter! Looking forward to more!
Son of ma-gun!
Damn if Twilight had a teacher like that now wonder she spazes out when shit happens
Even for a dragon, Celestia, could give a guy more of a warning!
I hope your just saving the detailed sex scenes for, Luna and Celestia, since you skipped to in this chapter?
I can just imagine the next chapter, with Spike waking up still grinning like an idiot... and Luna going for round seventy-six.
You seem to have skipped over some good bits in this chapter.
Mmmmmmm yes. More sexy times with dominating, experienced Luna
NOOOOOOOOOOO
A foursome and it's just skipped over?! Author plz
Nice tease there with skimping on the details of the party. I approve
Can't wait for the next one!
More Please!!!
5015105 I know. Why dey do dis to us?
Hmm...
Should I be bothered that Spike's move was tipped over in favor of video games? Everyone has a childish side, but this...
I DON'T FUCKIN KNOW NO MORES!
MORE PLEASE
Guards face had to be priceless to look at when she saw luna
hey mustard are u done with this story?
mmm get rekt guards.
This almost sounds like someone ran out of ideas on how to end the story so just left it on a possible "he ded" ending. I do hope for more though.
Update pls
I really like this... update please
the cliff hanger is too good i'm DIEING FROM SUSPENCE
… update?
Pokes chapter....
WHY DO AUTHORS ALWAYS END CHAPTERS WITH CLIFFHANGERS!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
plz continue this!