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Pepperoni, the owner of Pepperoni's Pizza's, has recently purchased an animatronic in hopes of drawing children in. He opens it to find a messaging machine along with a strange recording on it. Through the next several nights, this family will learn what it's like to truly fear what's in the dark while Shining Armor and his former Captain find the truth of what happened at the pizzeria all those years ago.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 12 )

A good story so far, can't wait to see more! Do I detect a Bob's Burgers reference?

4988722 Yeah! The thing is that I did an earlier story before that included the entire Bob Burger family (it's not here anymore).

I get it the 5th night phone message

So far I'm liking this, keep up the good work and I hope to see more of this soon

Haha. I like the five nights at freddys reference :raritywink:

Haha. I like the five nights at freddys reference :raritywink:

I'm liking the first chapter! It tells the setup for the main plot and it had a detective type feel to it, which is cool seeing Shining Armor's beginnings. Keep up the great work. :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks. That story is kinda gonna be a subplot, but it gives me an idea for an alternative universe version of the story focusing mainly on him in his early years.

There are a few misspells here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed by just combing over the chapter. Other then that, great chapter. I'm liking the father daughter thing between Pepperoni & Sound so far, it's funny. Oh, and 'Hoof of the North Star'?! I see what ya did there. Nice. :moustache:

Great chapter. Though I'm noticing each one is pretty short. I didn't have anything else to say, I just wanted to post on here. :rainbowlaugh:

Keep up the great work! I look forward to seeing more of this story! :derpytongue2:

Very good first chapter, and a brilliant setup, nice work.

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