• Member Since 21st Jun, 2013
  • offline last seen Dec 28th, 2017

Eventide Indigo

I forget what I wish to remember and remember what I wish to forget.


We hadn't needed the Elements of Harmony in a long time.
And she hadn't needed me even longer.

Things have fallen apart for Applejack. Her friends have moved on with their lives and the love of her life went with them. When she finally tries to patch things up, she realizes she may have waited too long.

[Cover art credits to the wonderful WhiteDiamondsLtd! Click the picture to take you to her DeviantART. I only added the text]

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 22 )

No, no, shut up, this was adorable. :rainbowkiss: So wonderfully bittersweet and adorable.

4905975 Aww, really? Thank you so much! :pinkiehappy::heart: I have this weird thing where I feel horribly ashamed of all my writing.

The feels are overcoming me

Damnit, why'd you go and make me cry?

This is so good it just about made me cry.:fluttercry:

Nice job.:pinkiesad2:

4906165 Aww, thank you! And sorry. :fluttershysad:

I have a sad now :fluttercry:

You did a great job conveying all of this story in general. I don't really have any complaint i can level at it. Other than that I am disappointed I won't see it progress any further than this. Although it is a good length for it. I couldn't imagine where you would go from there. I just often want impossible things.

4906370 Thank you so much! If people really really really liked this I would probably write a sequel.

Ah. Yes. A wonderful story. Sad, but with a great deal of truth.
I am familiar with this type of love. It brings back memories... But one must always move on.
Even if you want to stay in your past, all you can really do is walk away, with the occasional glance behind.

4906796 Well, thank you! :twilightsmile: Sorry it brings back bad memories though...

Not really bad ones. Just memories. Necessary ones.

I loved the story very well,it shows that some beautiful things are meant to die for once in a while and we just have to accept it and move on as if it will born again into something new

4908842 That's precisely the philosophy! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

4976520 Haha, that movie was amazing. Thanks for faving! :twilightsmile:

For the most part I can tell you, usually I dispise rarijack. No matter how many stories I read I can't see it. But this... This may have opened my eyes.... And then it crushed my heart. It fulfilled my expectations of them not working out, so why does it hurt? :fluttercry: Now if only I could find one where they work that will prove me wrong..... :raritycry:
On a different note, very well written! Glad I could read this great work of art :pinkiehappy:

5243700 Thank you so much! It means a lot to me!

5243839 you are very welcome :pinkiehappy:
And thank YOU! It was really good :derpytongue2:

Login or register to comment