Nightmare Moon has been defeated, Princess Luna has returned, and young Twilight Sparkle is about to begin a new chapter in life. But, as she prepares to move to Ponyville, she's still not sure whether she should go at all, or what she's supposed to learn when she gets there. How can she solve a problem with no clear definition? If she does find an answer, will she even recognize it when she does?
An expanded and revised version of my entry in the August Minific Writeoff, which carried the prompt 'Famous Last Words'.
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Very nice.
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Thanks!
That's my pre-reader! Brilliant as always.
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Senpai-Loyal has noticed me!
Dat was sweet. :3
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Thanks!
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So Nice So Lesson So Heart but so great.
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Thanks so much! :)
Interesting to see the expanded version — I had interpreted the original as occurring before the season opener. This puts rather a different cast on it, with Twilight having saved the world with friendship but still not being totally on board with giving up her life for these five cool new strangers.
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My page has been graced by horizon!
Seriously, thanks for stopping by to comment! My intention from the start was to position this in the (unseen in the show) time between the return of Luna and Twi's permanent move to Ponyville. That it did not show through clearly in the first edition points to the fact that I cranked this out with only two hours to go before deadline.
I do hope you liked the revisions though. :)
I'd like to talk to the ONE person who disliked this…jk ik it's their desicion, but still. (I'm sorry ik i also can't spell xD)
Clean, simple, to the point (though I'm not quite sure what the random tag is doing there). Have a ribbon:
i.imgur.com/6MrWqNZ.png
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Oh, wow! thank you so much! :D
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You're welcome
Nice story!