Just a Smile

All Trixie wants is a smile from the emotionless Maud. Yet, no matter how hard Trixie tried, her advances were completely ignored. Now, Trixie is willing to do anything to make Maud smile at her. Even if Trixie has to throw herself on Maud.

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DerpedRainbow

DerpedRainbow #1 · Aug 25th, 2014 · · ·

I really wants to play golf

Want. Just a small error I noticed.

Quick Wit -Littlepip-

Quick Wit -Littlepip- #2 · Aug 25th, 2014 · · ·

4902423 Thanks! Fixing it right away :)

Bakmah Genesis

Bakmah Genesis #3 · Aug 25th, 2014 · 8 · ·

Let this be a lesson, kids. We can get our crushes by getting roaringly drunk and attemtping to have sex with them.

Quick Wit -Littlepip-

Quick Wit -Littlepip- #4 · Aug 25th, 2014 · 2 · ·

4903995 It's always worked for me

crowscrowcrow

crowscrowcrow #5 · Aug 25th, 2014 · 1 · ·

This was a cute story. I loved it. ^^

Mauxie is awesome.

This is going to be the most silly opinionated nitpick but...

“So? You still wanna pleasure me?”

I just cannot picture Maud saying "wanna".

Quick Wit -Littlepip-

Quick Wit -Littlepip- #6 · Aug 25th, 2014 · 1 · ·

4904505 Thinking about it, I agree, from the show, it seems she just says the word as it is. I tried doing that for the most part.

I'm glad you liked the story I felt like it wasn't that good honestly.

Tome

Tome #7 · Sep 13th, 2014 · · ·

4903995
I concur.

Many grammar mistakes so I'll just list one that made me go wut.

Currently, Trixie was picking at a large rock, too busy at thinking about her crush. She wanted so bad to have Maud show give her a smile, that was the only thought on her mind day and night.

Quick Wit -Littlepip-

Quick Wit -Littlepip- #8 · Sep 13th, 2014 · · ·

4994137 Not too many?

zalla661

zalla661 #9 · Oct 7th, 2014 · 2 · ·

So short yet sweet at the same time! I love this story! Well, any story with Trixie is awesome in my books, but Maud is cool too. There should be a Maud icon...