The first four chapters of this story were written by UniqueSKD. All credit goes to him for those chapters, and for the idea. I do not know who drew the cover art, but it does not belong to me.
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You know as well as any other that the world of Equestria thrives on the principles of Friendship, and the Magic that comes from such a bond.
So let's take that world away from somepony, and show them what life is like when the Magic and Friendship is gone, no more than a silly little make-believe word frowned upon by adults with common sense.
Somepony's about to live life in a different Equestria, with our reality.
Because the dream can't last forever...
This story is currently on hiatus while I figure out what to do with it.
Chapters (5)
Is this a prequel to the other story with Happy in it?
Very good start. But I'm kinda scared to find out what this means.
4900298 Doesn't matter. Story's coming down now. Not continuing it.
I can't write serious stories, I have to face that fact. No.
Now, I'm writing FanFiction Poops!
They'll be like YouTube Poops, but Fan Fiction!
Poop!
4900460 What??!!! Why??!!! I thought that it's really good!!
4900542 If you think so, then I will grant all copyrights and ownership of this story to you then. I hope you will do it justice, and may your superior writing skills perhaps make this story worthy enough to find a spot in the Popular Section, if not the Featured box.
I salute you! Good luck! I look forward to seeing how you write the next chapter to this story, which is now yours!
4900542 Okay. Done. Look at the description for this story. Good luck, madam!
4900567 Are you joking?
4900573 How would I add chapters? Send them to you?
4900574 Oh, DollyIsBestPony, my sweet, lovely, kind, generous, polite friend. If I was really joking, you'd be throwing rotten fruit and vegetables at me right now, or at least you'd be trying to except there was a computer screen in your way.
In the words of a normal sane person, No. I'm not joking. Look at the descriptio for this story. I've made it official. YOU are the new writer.
4900579 Oh no. I'll send them all to you. Give me a while, though. I'm currently sassabacking some real major unununununth, and I need to keep bagagagaging or else I won't be able to finish my current shabangabang cabbage, you know?
(smiles while a plastic toy cuckoo pops in and out of his ears, a small bib that says 'HE'S CRAZY!' wrapped around its neck)
4900586 Okay. When you send them, could you also tell me what you were planning to do with the story?
4900592 I dunno. It's YOUR story now. What are YOU planning to do with it?
(points a finger at you for emphasis)
4900602 I want to know what you were planning because then I could use that as well.
4900608 I was planning whatever you were planning, to be honest.
Speaking of which, what were you planning? So I'll know what I was planning.
4900608 Just...throw something depressing and sad and boo-hoo-hoo into the story. All that heart-jerking stuff that I only get very lucky at writing really well.
4900619 You'll see!!
This is ... something. Why not
Let's see what's going on after that.
4900819 Read the other comments. DollyIsBestPony will be taking over the story now. It will be her story from this moment on. I'm waiting for the admins to tell me if they can transfer the story over to her profile or not.
its not bad its kind of a hooker neato
4902267 Go tell UniqueSKD that, cause he wrote those chapters, not me.
4900866 The story is really dark, but it's not that bad. I can feel many potential in this story.
Just one thing to pointing: the chapters are too small.
As i said before, let's see what's going happened.
4905145 I'll probably make the other chapters a bit larger. And, indeed, let us see where the story takes us.
I'm here for because of the crucifixion.
4920573 I'll let you know now, then, that it will not come until later in the story. Possibly.
4920592
Oh good I'm not late.
4920599 Not at all.
Hope that these little chapters have a direction. It also reminds me that Twi hasn't really done much for places outside of Ponyville.
4929179 Eh, kinda. They're just telling what happens to him in his childhood. I'll probably have a reason to do it, but not yet. I'll think something up. But yeah, Twilight hasn't done much. The other ponies have actually done more than her. But that should change with Season Five, if the little preview we got meant what I think it meant.