On the run

The mysterious Mare Do Well used to be loved and praised by all as the greatest, and only, vigilante in Ponyville but now she's on the run from any public contact as a vagabond. Why is this so? Is there a reason she can't be a savior without people trying to arrest her? Here is the story of why Mare Do Well no longer is a great hero...

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Grazy Polomare

Grazy Polomare #1 · Apr 17th, 2012 · 1 · ·

An interesting story I will say. I like the idea and I think that if you wanted to, you could go deeper with this story. Just my thoughts though.

Clu

Clu #2 · Apr 17th, 2012 · · ·

Well, it's a nicely written one-shot and all, but it kind of falls apart when you realize one thing: all Northern Haste had to do was get rid of her costume and hide it somewhere and she would have been free. Unless Hooves revealed her identity to the authorities, he was the only other soul who knew who she was before she told her sister. Despite this fallacy, it wasn't a bad read; keep up the good work.

Hibishi

Hibishi #3 · Apr 17th, 2012 · 1 · ·

464678 Yeah I didn't think too much about that. She didnt want to get rid of the hat or jacket because they belonged to her mother (forgot to mention the jacket before)

KazFox

KazFox #4 · Apr 18th, 2012 · · ·

465020 In all honesty, you can't just keep that stuff not only because it is an heirloom, but also because she's like Batman. She want's to keep everypony safe, but in the end, they want to put her away for something she didn't do. Batman wants to keep everyone safe, but after he rid the town of Joker's insanity, they showed that they no longer needed him. Basically saying, they both know that the world will be nothing without them. So they keep the suits. Or at least that is what I think.

Good job dear Brony. I await the next chapter full-heartedly.

Hibishi