Electric Blue is a newcomer to Ponyville, and she has no memory in the beginning. She befriends a couple of well known ponies by chance, and later forms her own group of friends with the ponies she knows best, Destiny Bond, Fluttershy, Braeburn, Azure Spark and Twisha. A lot of mysteries revolve around Blue; she learns that she used to be human, she is hunted by Glais, her arch rival in the human world, and all of her past is held in a diary. Many adventures and events happen throughout the story, and Equestria gets changed by Electric Blue herself.
Chapters (50)
Good into I can't wait to see what happins.
I did not see that coming.
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
WOW!
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you mean awsome
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Yep
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I knew it
Plz update
First I really like this story can't wait till update.
this has to be one of the best fics I've ever read. Keep up the good work bro
First
finally the update has arrived just so you know this was the first fic and my my most favorite fic aswell great job
First
Once again great story
good job
.....I'm confused and happy
Confused because wtf is every ponies problem with blue
Happy becauseupdate is finally here
Good work I give this story 10/10
Ok weird chapter
First and yes finally an update
What do you mean again?
Yes new update
First
.....noob tempts fate...shit happens. the usual....but Its interesting...one question though....Why is the last name not capitalized?
753653 Oh hey...I wanted to talk to you...I was wondering what you'd be like, considering every story that I go to, you are on.
And yeah...something is going to happen.
I just realized....you haven't described what the main character looks like...The only thing we know so far is that her coat is orange....
784906 They certainly did...Hmn....The way this character describes orange, makes me think of a light tangerine color not unlike AJ's coat, but darker and slightly more rosy.
...hmn....well...that was more detailed....What is the main characters hair color/s though?
Hmn...Something isn't right...The idea transitions are off kilter, and there isn't quite a believable reaction coming from the mane 6, and you start out with an underdeveloped character, redeveloping skills and memories, without proper reactions to accompany said skills. This doesn't feel right. And while I like the ideas in this story, I think that the writing skills that accompany said Ideas, are not also not developed enough for me to enjoy properly.
I'm apologize if you feel hurt from this critique, but it is my honest opinion.
ISA
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Thanks for your critique, I appreciate it!
Yeah, back then it was early stages as I had just got into writing. It gets better as you go along though, trust me.
And regarding the personalities and ideas; it will all start making more sense, again, as you go along. I realised the starting chapters were a little off, so I made up for it in the later stages.
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This is what the main character looks like: http://fav.me/d5rb6vo
I upload these stories mainly on my DeviantArt account so I apologise for the confusion; as I assume folks have seen the design already.
So far this book is great
but it makes me so sad to wait for each chapter 
but I can wait 
I forgot to say holy crap wtf Sean
You and the gods will fall by the hands of Anne 
WTF I cant believe no one comments on how good this story is I mean really awesome work dave
keep at it ps. when does it end because I hope its not to soon 
3385053 Very soon, unfortunately. It's definitely been a long road to get this far though.
Ah ok then it was fun while it lasted
OMFG I cant take the sadness please tell me she wakes up in a hospital
Well that's it, that's the end. After two years of hard work and possibly forgetting about many plot points, we finally made it to the finish. It's sad to come to a conclusion when you've spent a long time doing this, but it's fulfilling to know that you've actually completed something this big. I hope you all had fun reading, had a laugh, a cry, a think, a smile, a boo and a hiss.
Let me know if you want more of this, and I'll think of making a sequel, because I still have many ideas to come.
Ending credits music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eBEvrhSjWWI
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NAOW!
Ok. I can't read this anymore, the plot is good but you seriously need to work on your spelling and grammar. If you want I could edit your story for you, but if it's left as it is you won't get many more up votes. You really should consider getting some one to edit this, it would get you more views and up votes .
It's a bit to fast. She just befriended the Mane Six just like that? And the princess already having her write friendship reports? Eh. Whatever. It's good so I'm gonna read it.
It's been so long since I've been able to read this it's nice to remember how Midnight was introduced ^^