• Member Since 17th Nov, 2011
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Fenwolf2003


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I remember I wanted to write something to do with AJ and Pinkie, along with something kinda spooky for Halloween 2011, so I ended up scribbling this out quickly for fun.

Based on that egg that Pinkie lays when she ran off in Luna Eclipsed, don't know why but this just came to mind for me.

It's based on the Sci-Fi idea of 'Grey Goo', based on the spread of nanomachines that overrun a world and devour it, I just Pinkie-fied it.

Hope you enjoy folks. I'll hopefully get to posting my bigger fics eventually.

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Spectacular.

Pretty twisted story there, I think your adaption worked out well. My only criticism is that it felt a little sparse as far as the cast goes.

Twisted but good

i really enjoyed this one. I personally think that AJ and Pinkie would get along much better than most people think.
It also really made me wish i had a tiny palm sized Pinkie to have about my day, but who wouldn't want that. (other than people who want to keep their candy of course.)
also i don't know exactly what the insinuation was with the ending, but i'm just gonna stick with the head cannon that she went in for a kiss.
......yup.....
....that's all....:applejackunsure:

Anyway, great story!

This reminds me, gonna go add to my mini-fic about Pinkie coming into my world.

512971

Uh... thanks for posting this randomly on my fic?

This is one of the few Grimdark fanfics that I actually like, and I think it's because It doesn't need spreading blood and guts everywhere to create the darkness atmosphere. Very well done!

About the ending, The Pinkies only went to kiss AJ, and nothing else happened... :applejackconfused:

563922

Hah. I barely consider it "Grimdark" just I thought the dark tag fitted.

And who knows what happened at the end, I left it open for folks.

568311
Whatever! The point is: This is good and you should feel good. :ajsmug:

And we, the folks, appreciate that.

This reminds me of something I would read by Stephen King. It's really good!
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