It's been a few weeks, (Four weeks to be exact) seen Spike and his lover the Mane-iac seen each-other, and finally they seen each-other again.
From the mini text. Not one of those 'seen's is right. In order it should be- since(It's been a few weeks since), saw(Spike and Mane-iac saw), see(finally they see each other).
I like so far
E-less Spike is best Spike
Where is the Fanfic?
He's gonna spike her good!!!
I noticed a few grammar errors, other than that a great fic would like to see more chapters though
Whoo! Sequel!
Awesome a sequel!
Awwww yisss! Sequel!!
From the mini text. Not one of those 'seen's is right. In order it should be-
since(It's been a few weeks since),
saw(Spike and Mane-iac saw),
see(finally they see each other).
It warms my heart to see Spike and Mane-iac reunited after 4 whole weeks