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Kovy


Hiatus for now. I'm into more adult themed anthropormorphic/TF stuff now

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Applebloom goes searching for her big sister Applejack and when returning with her from Ponyville Applebloom finds her self in a emergency from a falling tree and breaks her leg. Applejack then realized that she wanted to give the love that she gave to Applebloom to a little one of her own but she is declined this from happening.

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i like it and are you going to make it so everyone that follow you on your account can read it

4897292 Yah I need to publish first I'm doing that now

Comment posted by i_am_the_jam deleted Aug 24th, 2014

"Apple Bloom" is two words, not one. All of the material about the show says so, and you could have found this out with maybe two seconds of research. And that's just one of several errors in your story description, plus the two errors in your chapter title.
"Were's Apple jack?" = :twilightangry2:
"Where's Applejack?" = :twilightsmile:

The bad news: I'm not reading your story.
The good news: since I haven't read it, you won't be getting my downvote.

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4898104 I thought that was out of preference, like Cadence's name. :applecry::facehoof:

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You summed it up brilliantly ... then you kept saying more stuff. :trollestia:

You used a semicolon correctly!

I would kill to have someone say this of me. :rainbowwild:

Comment posted by Elric of Melnipony deleted Aug 24th, 2014

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It took me, like, three hours to do all of this, and right after I got off work, so I'm surprised I only missed one thing. XD

But after a while, I was pretty much just repeating myself, so skipped over stuff that I already covered. Which is why I had less to say at the end besides, "This is wrong."

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Three hours? I dunno whether to applaud your commitment or have you committed! :pinkiegasp:

4898893 You summed up everything perfectly

I may be a fairly new writer or not so new depending on which of my accounts you are looking at. But yes it was a god review but it was...long

Heck i even may have noticed something. The scene with the doctor kind of reminds of the comic a seedless apple but i could be mistaken

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This is what I sell.

Haw! JK. But yeah, it's a comment graveyard here.

Oh boy here we go:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by MnM deleted Aug 24th, 2014

Your repetition just exploded then that explosion just exploded.

Dat comment graveyard.:rainbowderp:

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