• Member Since 22nd Apr, 2013
  • offline last seen July 21st

Acoustic Pulse

My name's John, I'm 22.


Thanks, whoever made the picture.

This is based on a series of movies called Hellraiser, where unsuspecting victims solve a puzzle box, bringing a horrible being known as Pinhead to Earth. Your job is to escape, while his job is to drag you to Hell in the most torturous ways he can dream up.

Twilight solves a puzzle box, and is now in Pony Hell, or Tartarus. How will she get out of this one? Read and find out.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )


She goes downstairs, on her way to check the mail, as she did every morning. She sifted through the bills she had already paid.

Tense shift there. A random present tense phrase when you're using past tense.

4889962 Whoops. xD I fixed it.

I've been waiting for a Hellraiser/FiM crossover for so long you have no idea, I was thinking of writing it myself even.

Using Tirek as Pinhead... interesting.

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

4992826 I don't think I did too bad.

So as you know the reading is done. If you want feel free to post a link to the video in your story description.

Speaking of which. Did you enjoy my reading of Tartarus Raiser? I am just curious as to your thoughts on it. :twilightsmile:

5271621 My only problem is your lisp, but you can't help that. That's why I didn't mention it. I thought it was a good read. The transition noise was awesome.

5271624 Yeah sadly I have a lisp and what is funny is I don't hear it when I am recording. At least I remove all the parts where you hear me breathing and my occasional "um".

I am using the transition sound now because in the past I would just pause between transitions and then I would accidentally remove these pauses in order to shorten the story.

If you have any tips that you think might help feel free to send me a PM and if you enjoy the story enough feel free to include a link to it hear so that other people can hear it (It is hard for us youtube readers when we are starting out).

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