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PresentPerfect


Fanfiction masochist. :B She/they https://ko-fi.com/presentperfect

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It's hard being a one-eyed eye doctor when you've got a crush on a pony like Rarity.

My first fic published on EQD, originally 6/12/2011.

Reading by Goombasa, Scribbler, DeadlyReg and Hero541!

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Comments ( 30 )

That was sad, but good! I really liked this. :raritystarry:

That was fantastic.

Rather than finding a love in crush (Rarity), he found the love with Crystal. Rather excellent.

I've always liked this one, but it needs a "Romance" tag.

(And a sequel.)

Aww, I'm glad I found a story on the one-eyed pony!

I'm not sure Rarity realized Crystal was an albino. To me it seemed like Rarity thought Crystal just did a poor job of dying her own mane, and so she bought her a different color dye.

I like the ending, it made me smile.

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Hmm. It doesn't have a [Shipping] tag on EQD because it's not shipping (i.e., doesn't involve actual characters), but Romance is somewhat broader in meaning, isn't it? I'll go ahead and change that.

And I've got a sequel in the works, but it's not very high on my list of priorities.

This fic needs more attention... ._.

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Thanks for thinking so. :) All you can really do it tell your friends about it. Or add it to a group, I guess. (I don't know anything about groups.)

528227 yea, i dont know anything about groups either. But i'm definatly mentioning this to the few people I know flollowing MLP! It's freakin awesome. :rainbowkiss:

Love this fic.

You can always tell a good fic by the ones you come back, like, a year later to reread it.

Also, good job moving it here as opposed to EqD.

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Well, it's still on EQD. The GDoc now points here. Glad you like and remember this one. :D

1435825 I know it is, that's how I got here. It took me about 10 minutes to find it in the story archive, and I had to go to the old, non-updated story list to find it.

You must tell me your secret for getting posted. Is it blackmail, magic, poison, a parasite, poison?

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Heh. The last three were a reference to the movie "Bolt." I love that movie.

Still, I must have your secret for getting posted.

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Nono, posted where? I flat-out do not understand your question. c.c

Oh, this was really good! Right beneath your muzzle, doc. J'adore! :pinkiehappy:

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EqD. I've had a problem trying to get stories through. It's like no matter how many fine and finicky fixes I make there seem to be more tiny issues.

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You just gotta get a good network of editors and pre-readers to look over your stuff. :B Give it a thorough wash and rinse three or four times before you try submitting the first time.

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I am quickly realizing that is the only solution. Thank you for confirming it.

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*sneaksneaksneak*

*looks around*

*runs away*

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I saw that there was a new story from you in my inbox and then I saw your comment show up here while I was typing up my journal and I went "wait, no way, she didn't" and then I opened the email and OH MY GOD :D:D:D

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I'm glad you like it. ^_^ I find it rather amusing that I started work on this fic back in August, way, waaaaaay before we ever actually spoke, and it wasn't until this month that realised you and the author were one and the same. :derpytongue2:

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Oh dang, I feel even better now. :D

Wonderful fic PP! One of my favourites!!!
:derpytongue2:

beautiful story top 5 #3 really 190% bishop approved :moustache:

stay classy

Please, oh please don't use the word damn in a MLP fanfic rated "everyone".

i listened to scribbler's reading and greatly enjoyed it. didn't think there was another albino pony in ponyville (i realize there's no confirmation vinyl lives there) and was intrigued by it.

a very good story, sir

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