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D0CT0RWHOOVES


Just your average MLP fan making their return to the fandom.

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Spike - A dragon dejected after being rejected by the mare of his dreams.
Bon Bon - A lonely mare who takes it upon herself to make Spike feel better.

Will Spike ever learn to love another? Will Bon Bon be able to find the stallion, or dragon, of her dreams? Is this the only Spike x Bon Bon story in existence?! Will Bon Bon use the same voice actor twice?!

All those questions and more will be answered in A Sweet Treat, the first collaboration between D0CT0RWHOOVES and FamousLastWords!

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Comments ( 44 )

seems interesting.

This. I like this. :moustache:

I never would have put Spike and Bon-Bon as a couple. Now that I have seen this I like it, although I wonder where Lyra is? She is never too far from Bonnie.

Unused spike ship? I'm in.:moustache:

4882559 I'm honestly not sure I wanna put Lyra in here unless it's absolutely necessary. Not because I dislike her or anything, but I like to break the molds of fanon creations. Of course, D0CTOR will also be plotting out chapters, so if he wants her in, she'll be in. :moustache:

To my dear nemasis, the disliker,

TAKE IT BACK NOW. And like the sh!+ out of this

An used Spike ship. You both have my support as a fellow Spike shipper.

Oh, how neat! I like this ship already. I shall jump in and sail with you, captain!

4882966 Yeah, but you and I shipped Spike before it was cool. :yay: :trollestia:
Thanks for reading, man.

4883051 No problem, I wasn't about to pass out on a Spike ship never done before. Besides I like this guys SpikeXShimmer fics.

4883124 Yep, that's how I first found him. I fell in love with those stories.

I love you guys for this. I will enjoy reading this. :moustache::heart:

Oh this is too good. I am really interested in this story. I cant wait for the next chapter. Keep it up! :twilightoops::moustache:

Well, I'm interested....this is the first SpikeBon ship that I have read before....I am definitely gonna keep an eye on this one....And it's also cool that he/she's the same author that wrote Sunset's Beauty is gracing us with another cool Spike ship story with another character that is woefully not used.

hm... I wonder how old you think he is (and the girls for that matter) not including the unknown time he spent in his egg

Aren't you the absolute moron eh Rarity? :pinkiehappy:

I know that Bon Bon x Lyra is a very common held ship and that Bon Bon having never met Lyra would of upset alot of bronies i like how you remedied that by suggesting that Bon Bon and Lyra broke up it really did a wonder for the story line. I AM FOLLOWING THIS and when i follow a story i don't stop following it until it is A) cancelled or B) completed so you don't have to worry about time for me

This is a good ship. ANOTHER!

4882207 That it does. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

...I know it's in poor taste,but I must question...how many licks does it take to get to the center of a bon bon?

well..... Okay I'll jump aboard, if you don't mind.:heart::yay:


>Ecocat<

4884647 It depends on how hard you lick. :moustache:

4884951 ...Gentle licks work just as well,if you know where to lick~

4884957 Oh... I know where to lick. :trixieshiftleft:

4885012 ...I shall go masturbate furiously now...

4884647 You magnificent bastard(, I read your book!)

4885064 ...I have a book?

4885096 Yes. It's called 'Jokes for Dummies, by Dummies'. A postively thrilling read.

*Alondro reads too much into the title*

Hmm... A Sweet Treat... implies something is being eaten... Spike is a dragon... Bon Bon is a pony... :pinkiegasp:

SPIKE'S GONNA EAT BONBON!!!! :raritydespair:

:trollestia:

4885578 Darn! well there goes the twist ending!

4885617

I am okay with this development.

4885617 Eh, I'm sure Bon Bon will think it's hot.

She's a weirdo like that. (Alondro's head canon is a terrifying place...) :pinkiecrazy:

Way to make Rarity a freaking bitch. Anyway this looks good I shall follow it.

I hope there is a scene in this where Bon Bon gets angry with Rarity for what she did and Rarity explains her side of what happened. I'm sure Rarity didn't mean to be mean, Spike kind of put her on the spot and she probably just ended up in a ranting mode (out of nervousness, a bit like Twilight) and also probably thought that presenting him with all the logical reasons why it wouldn't work would actually make him feel better (if it can't work because of factors outside of his control e.g. being too young, then it isn't any fault of his own, ergo how can you feel bad about it), she'll probably realise later how hurtful it actually was, like I said she was put on the spot. It'd be really nice if Bon Bon then helped Rarity and Spike repair their friendship, after all I think Spike is a bit angry with her right now. Also, I'm not sure how happy Bon Bon is going to be when her new worker, on his first day no less, brings in what will essentially be Equestria's strictest health and safety inspector.

A sweet Treat...
Bon-Bon gets eaten out, right?

4893176 It seems everyone expects and or wants that to happen! :derpyderp2:

Um...is it just me or does Twilight seem more worried than a gazel wearing a meat dress?

Is this story cancelled, or did you just forget about it?

Great story is dead... :twilightangry2:

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