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Writagon


Im here to share fanfics and want to portray a new side to ponies.

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A compilation of creative chaos as written by Discord. The different chapters will be quite random and probably won't fit into one contiguous storyline. So quite simply this is an assembly of chaos into organized chapters courtesy of Discord.

Authors Note: Those cautious about the Teen and Sex tag need only slightly worry as it will only apply to the first chapter. There isn't technically any sex going on but, well, you'll see.

Cover art by: Empress Kimba

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

This is a pretty interesting attempt here, but the innuendo is used too frequently to be the main theme of the story. It's a good gag every now and then, but it makes it far too predictable, which isn't really funny. Also, the humor is coerced by the purposeful omission of punctuation, which serves the joke, but can be argued that it just doesn't feel right. Also, I feel like Twilight would wise up to the fact that suddenly everything is oddly suggestive. She also seems to overreact oddly in the beginning. She might think it's weird, but she isn't one to assume the worst of her friends like that, she'd assume coincidence first. Also, it just seems like Discord is narrating... Is he in any way involved with these antics? Or is he just narrating for no other reason than the nature of the story being random?

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Its rather subtle but warping Twilights world in a simple chapter of sexual innuendo is something he would probably do for fun. The point of view is a little hard to place as he's acting like he's watching over his own chaos affecting different ponies. Changing Twilight world so suddenly to this effect may cause some surprise at first followed by disbelief until the inevitable happens. This really isnt a main theme to a story, its to a chapter also, literally this is a book about causing chaos in a creative fashion unlike his usual antics.

Haha! You had me cackling all the way to the end! Keep up the great work!

Hello I am from The Hot Muffins. I am here to review your fic.

Well done you have made it. I shall inform Pedro. btw:rainbowlaugh:

I'm going to assume this is the spiritual successor to Discord's Guide to Clopfics. They're already both inappropriate enough.

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Not at all, as said only one chapter is actually required to have the teen/sex tags but still needed.

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Im hoping people aren't getting the wrong idea that this will be about sex honestly.

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