Tainted Love: A Twysalis Prompt Tag Collab

by Foals Errand

Big Macintosh by Cupcake_Swirl (new author)

by Cupcake_Swirl

"Hey, Big Mac!" Apple Jack shouted trying to find her big brother, Apple Jack had checked all of the house when she realized that it was Big Macintosh she was looking for, Big Macintosh the workaholic, and with that she galloped out to the field she turned frantically looking for him,

"eeyup" Macintosh replied shaking his ginger mane out of his eye appearing from behind a tractor, Apple Jack shook her head,

"One of these days you'll give me a heart attack" Apple Jack said pretending to be angry "Anyway," Apple Jack continued "a certain pony is coming round for diner tonight, a certain princess pony!" Apple Jack said emphasizing the princess part for a more dramatic effect. Sliding up to her brother she then carried on to say "And stay for a WHOLE night!" Big Macintosh looked at Apple Jack and squinted trying to tell if she was joking or not a couple seconds later he looked Apple Jack in the eye, wiped away a bud of sweat that had appeared on his fore head and said,

"Is she bringing a guest?" Apple Jack laughed and bowed her head with laughter

"Now look-y here Mr Over-Protective-I-Love-My-Little-Sisters-Best-Friend-Who-Happens-To-Be-Princess *GASP*, Twilight is bringing a guest, and yes he is a partner of sorts and no you are not aloud to make him leave!" Apple Jack looked at Big Macintosh who currently looked like he'd seen a puppy die "Do A Make Myself Clear?"Apple Jack asked

"eeyup" sighed Big Macintosh plodding back out to the field. Apple Jack looked after him wondering how her big brother could love her best friend.

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"Apple Jack it's amazing to see you!" Twilight gushed hugging her friend close

"It's amazing to see you too Twilight but where is this handsome devil you've been talkin' 'bout so much!" Apple Jack asked looking behind her.

"Well, You see he isn't exactly, he's not , emm" Twilight stuttered

"Well, Spit it out then, is he not coming?" Apple Jack suggested trying to help her friend,

"Okay," Twilight started "He isn't a he he's a she and she isn't a pony she's a changeling and she isn't a regular changeling she's the queen changeling, Chrysalis" Twilight said without stopping for a breath

"Twilight, have you lost your mind the last time she was in Equestria she ruined a wedding and not just any wedding, your brothers wedding, terrorized everypony and.."Apple Jack said getting cut off by Twilight mid rant

"Yes I know Apple Jack but when you look at it from her point she did exactly what any one of us would've done in her situation, her people were going to die" Twilight said as Chrysalis came up behind her and stood next to her,

"How do I know she won't kill me and my family during the night?" Apple Jack asked looking at Chrysalis like she was a rather nasty bug that she found in one of her apples.

"I don't want to even think that you would suggest I wound bring somepony to your home that would harm you" Twilight said sounding quite appalled, Twilight turned to Chrysalis and whispered something in Hemipid that Apple Jack didn't under stand

"What was that now?" Apple Jack asked "Actually, never mind Twilight, I'm sorry please come in your bed is all ready. I didn't mean to offend you or Chrysalis" Apple Jack said looking extremely apologetic. Twilight turned to give Chrysalis a light kiss when Big Macintosh came out just to see his crush kiss Chrysalis.

Comments

[BBkat]

I'm pretty sure AJ's name is all one word. Seeing it written as Apple Jack is, jarring to say the least.

[Kritziebomelu]

yea, that needs proofreading. and a lot of it :-/

[Lelouch Vi Britania]

This could use a decent bit of editing, no offence.

[Europa]

Well, everyone has to start somewhere.

[bobbananaville]

5670529 To be fair, this is a prompt-writing collection. We don't worry about editing much until after the fact, if we want to.