• Member Since 16th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 19th, 2016

Slick Dash


T

My version of the origin of Discord the Draconequus. Disc and Tia were friends, secret lovers, and trusted companions for years. But when the topic of "ascension" Seems to be on everyponies tongue concerning Tia, Disc grows worried.
Kind regards to foxbrony777 who got me fired up for this story and kept on pushing me to get it done!

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 14 )

There you go again with that sad thing. Man, you got it down to a science now.
Which, if you look at it, is kinda 'sad' that there is a science for this type of thing.

Great mini story, fun read. :pinkiehappy:
Till the next one!

~8chill

short,sweet if a tad bitter and well told. you get a thumb.:eeyup:

I won't even be able to compete Brony. I just planned on telling the side story of Luna and Celestia and their jealousy of each other as they fight for Him. I commend you Brony. You're just too damn good. But that does not deter me, I will be finished soon. Good job and good luck in your future endeavors.

Adieu~

642722 im glad :pinkiehappy: everybody, this guy is the one who challenged me to write a sad fic at the sane time as him! He's a great author and deserves many a praise!:derpytongue2:

643754 You flatter me so and I appreciate it Brony... But you know too damn well that this is your talent. I'm but only a tragedy whereas you are 'teh feels' as they would say. You don't make people feel such, you make them become such. I'm proud to have been able to challenge you before I leave :pinkiehappy:

Adieu~

644204 your very welcome, and i'm very flattered! :pinkiesmile:

This was absolutely fantastic. I'd love to read a sequel on discord's reign and fight with celestia by you. :fluttershyouch: but only if you want to.

678616 a sequel... Hmmm now that's a thought... Maybe :derpytongue2:

That was a great story, it was short but still hit all the points. I hope you decide to do another.

Gotta say, this is probably my favorite short story I've read in a while. I love pretty much all of it, so i just had to say thanks, and you have my like.

wasn't there a comic for this?
:rainbowhuh:

2931620 If there is and you find it, please send it to me! I love finding things that have similarities to my own work! :pinkiehappy:

2933921
i couldn't find the beginning, but heres is what i think is part of the comic i was thinking about
static.fjcdn.com/pictures/Discordantly+Discord+s+Story.+This+is+a+comic+about+the+origins_5f7503_3061807.jpg
p.s. a quick summary of the beginning: star swirl has a crush on Celestia, and wail demonstrating his newest project The Elements of Harmony to her and her sister the elements react to them and they both ascend it to alicorn hood, he attempts to ascend but fails, later though experimenting he learns there is a source of power other then harmony, chaos witch he focuses though many animal sprite totems, after he transforms he goes to confess his love to Celestia.: that should be where the comic strips stars off
again sorry i couldn't find the beginning comic strip

Holy shit, i mean i read some bad stories today but this one ........ it's amazing it makes all those bad stories I've read like a distant memory, i love the way discord was perceived in this and stupid ass tradition of ascendance was destroyed with the king.

This is truly one of my most favorite story on Fim Fiction, well done dear author.

Login or register to comment