Dark8,311 stories ·3,761 members
The Group That Is Pretty Much Every Other Group Combined9,851 stories ·925 members
The Shameless Self-Promotion Bureau49,209 stories ·5,457 members
Despair is Anthropomorphic Personification of...well, despair. He holds a secret so powerful and deadly that it could mean the end of everything and it's about to be revealed...
(I don't know where this came from, but it came out of the blue. I might make a series if it does well. Also drop a like or a comment if you want to see more.)
Page generated in 0.079 seconds
Total duration
750 users online
657,589 hits today, 2,004,447 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Interesting start! I'll be watching.
Could use a little more editing. Celestia quoting his words needs to be differentiated somehow (extra 'single quotes' usually) and a few word errors like "weigh" instead of "weight", "seen" vs "saw" and "something's" instead of "some things"... Doesn't look like there's anything too major though.
Continue...
This is set to 'complete', so does that mean we'll never get to know what he said?
Until further notice, I'll assume it was "You're a toymaker's creation, Hasbro."
Intriguing. I'll be awaiting the next chapter. Do some editing though. I don't personally mind it but it starts to bug some people if it becomes a habit. I would very much like to see this go somewhere.
Welp
Celestia's mind has very literally been blown by the sound of it. But really, it's just common sense that you probably don't want to see what the embodiment of despair has seen.