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Oh wow. :twilightsheepish:

That was an awesome fic. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

awesome best shiping twispike awesome:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Woo! TwiSpike FTW :twilightsmile: :heart: :moustache:


:moustache: - Bravo

Me Gusta. :pinkiehappy:

You know I already read this on fanfic but I'm glad your on this site friend, welcome, I'll be awaitng to see what else you have, names Heartless demon wolf in case you don't know on Fanfiction.net:rainbowlaugh: GO SPILIGHT!!!!

:moustache: + :twilightsmile:=:heart: FOREVER!!!!!:yay:

Look more Spike. Alright.

He tried to cover himself, but it was in vein; the damage was already done.

Supposed to be vain, else good reading :moustache:
Differences between vein,vain & vane

Very nicely done!
Just needed some spacing between dialogue, but other then that great story.:moustache::heart::twilightsmile:

D'aaaawwwwwww :heart:

Nice story good job :twilightsmile:

my first fic of this kind... maybe i shouldn't have tried this one.. it's disturbing

1883602 I have to agree. The fic was brilliant, but you need the paragraphs and spacing to help make it readable. I got looped on the same lines quite a few times trying to read this.

hell yes, that was nice. another good twiXspike fic. this pairing just makes the most sense:twilightsmile:

bravo indeed, you barley had any hate (besides the constructive criticism) and you made a great story:moustache:

great story! hope to see more from you.


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