This story is a sequel to Six wishes for six elements
[CURRENTLY IN NEED OF COVER ART] [Multi-crossover]
Characters used:
Captain America (Marvel)
Bucky Barnes (Marvel)
Slade Wilson (DC)
Medic (Valve)
Erica Hartmann (Strike Witches)
Gertrud Barkhorn (Strike Witches)
As HYDRA, Odin Allfather and Princess Celestia soon found, there wasn't just one universe. No... there were many, hundreds, thousands, millions. Countless realms and planes that were so alike yet so obviously different. Equestria however, was not just a place that was unique amongst the countless realms, but also, a place that was a doorway to others. From one universe to another, one would have to go to Equestria first.
To any conqueror that sought to build the vastest empire possible, it would be necessary to control Equestria.
And to Red Skull, he was this conqueror. Not only would "local resources" aid him, but once he was done, he would have the power needed to launch an endless campaign that would make him a god amongst gods.
Fortunately, Princess Celestia wasn't about to let this happen.
All characters belong to their respective owners.
And the shows on the road!
"Why aren't you two wearing any pants?"
Oh man, that's what I was thinking!
so... ze red skull haz returned? and iz just as cunning and smart az in ze movies... HAIL HYDRA!
...or am i?
just kidding
(I probably butchered a typed German accent)
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Hope everyone also knows Strucker, Crossbones and Reaper. They had their fair share of awesome in the comics and the animated series.
Slade... I pity you... Albeit if Pinkie somehow managed to meet Deadpool as well I'm gonna pity him even more.
4885390 To properly use a striker unit, the witches cannot wear pants. They can get away with stockings, but it has a slight diminishing effect. Only Sanya, and a couple others ever wear stockings, the majority just go pantsless at all times.
Oh man have I got a good theme for the fight between those 2. I may have sent it to you before(can't exactly remember) but it is called... Otherworld
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Dis song...
So I just gotta ask. Will a certain merc with a mouth be appearing to annoy Slade?
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Eventually... my estimation...
At least two stories away. In short...
COME BACK IN EIGHT MONTHS FOR DEADPOOL.
4915956 Guardians of the galaxy goes along with the avengers storyline. Odin gave the red ingot of the six to the collector at the end of Thor 2. GET THEM IN THERE!!!!!
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Alrighty!
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Just saw Guardians of the Galaxy yesterday
. LOVED IT.
Now that Celestials are confirmed to be apart of the Marvel movie-verse... the possibilities have now grown endless.
little bb-code issue when it came to the italics at the end. forgot the [ and as a result the rest of the chapter was in italics. otherwise good job
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That gets me every time
Bucky the hypocrite, ladies and gentlemen.
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Totally not intended
So Thor will not be making an appearance... But what about the 4th wall breaking, chimichanga eating, regenerating degenerate, merc with a mouth, Deadpool? Yeah I spent a bit of time finding those titles :3
5051719 that title was sarcastic. Thor is sure as Odin's beard that he's coming in! Deadpool too.
Due to the fact that Deadpool has a tendency to break the fourth wall... I wonder if I can slip him in before actually making him one of the focus characters.
5052530 Probably can.. and in one of the wackiest ways possible. Using a health bar as a weapon. I would pay money to see that happen.
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5053052 I just came here to say this....
HAIL HYDRA!
I REGRET NOTHING!!! NOTHING!!!
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Adolf Shitler.
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Bad nazi joke is bad. I regret nothing.
so, love potion? ouch, things are going to get wierd, and fast.
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You can imagine how easily something might go wrong....
5130274 And of course I wouldn't be surprised if Deadpool is sitting juuuuust beyond the fourth wall eating popcorn while watching everything.
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Better yet... I think we might be able to introduce his best buddy who might end up quiting his current job...
Just a minor nitpick. Its "Schweinehund".
Taht aside, I´m enjoying this so far.^^
Poor, poor Bob. He just joined HYDRA for the dental plan. To bad they don´t have any.^^
...
Wait a minute! Does this mean Deadpool is on the way? You kow, because Bob?
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Maaaaaaaaaaaaayyyybe.
Pretty good, but characters speaking during fights always break my suspension of disbelief.
"Oh, you are bad! I am taunting you!"
"How dare you! Now I'm gonna rush and make a mistake!"
"Haha! you fell for it! Now I prevail!"
"It can't be! I am INVINCIBLE!" - ded
That's what come up in my head when characters speak as they bash swords or whatever.
9/10 it's OK - RRR
Also, for heated gunfights, Payday soundtrack > all. Ave Maria's good but a bit cliché in my opinion.
Great, they now have a slight relationship.
I think that they are going to need a bed.
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Too soon... Too soon...
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Alright... I'll keep that in mind.
More fighting. Less talking.
Got it.
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It's a choice of style.
Personally, the only words my character say while fighting are related to the fight: announcing maneuvers to allies, battlefield intel, orders, that kind of stuff. That said, I never wrote a brawl though, always gunfights.
My main peeve is that your characters sound too dramatic while fighting.
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Alright... will keep that in mind. if it isn't too much to ask, can you name the "worst offenders" of this category? I actually want to see if I may be butchering anything.
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A good example: the beginning of chapter 33. There's more lines of dialogue than of fighting.
I understand that describing actions takes little words and that Slade is trying to get a rise out of his opponent, but that's a bit too much IMO. Maybe it's the way it's written. I like to insert actions in my dialogue, keeps a good flow.
keep in mind that I'm no expert, just a random dude who happens to write stories.
That ending
Moar
Finally, it's over.
It's beautiful..... *THUD*
I think you KOed Hades from all the chaos you brought in.. Nice work!
i think my brain just quitted,
Somehow I can imagine a certain merc with a mouth trying to get through the line of kids with a pen.
And just what drug kingpins horde did that stack come from?
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Typical anime excuses
I know precious little about Owlman outside of seeing something fro ma movie my sister found once, (he truly wished to destroy ALL realities) but what is his angle?
Query; Is Discord still on vacation in that book of his?
Second Query; They seem to speak of Odin as if they've met before, why?
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Think of him as an ultra-nihilist. Life is so pointless because of all these alternate realities that he will make the one action that has meaning. Destroy every single one.