When Spike emerges from a long sleep, he finds himself with a new body... and wings. He never anticipated that he would find much more than just clouds in the sky.
Sometimes, even when two creatures seem like they are completely different in every way, they need but one thing in common to unite them forever. It is true what they say, friendship is love, just lacking wings.
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Awesomesauce. Can't wait to see what happens next!
MOAR? MOAR.
Rainbow Spike? Color me interested! *tracks*
I always got interested in what would happen when Spike grew up...But i thought it would be slower than this.
This is a nice story, but the idea of
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seems rather strange...of course, absolutely possible, but i think Spike would want to show off to Rarity first. 
Anyways, i'm rather happy with the story, and wanting more.
THIS. IS. AWESOME.
Great work on thr science behind the growing, though more details would be appreciated.
Can't wait to read what happens next. Updates. Now. Please?
Rainbow Dash has been pretty much shipped with everything but the kitchen sink. Being paired with Spike was bound to happen eventually.
Anyway, this is actually pretty good. MOAR
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
This is pretty good.
The main thing I like about this fic is the fact that you didn't immediately go. "AND THEN RAINBOW SAW THAT SPIKE HAD WINGS AND SHE HAD A WINGBONER AND HURR HURR."
If I were to read this without any knowledge of it's premise, I would have no idea it was a RainbowSpike right now. This is a wonderful thing. Love is not some Romeo and Juliet instantaneous thing. It takes time.
Keep up the good work, and I have this fic bookmarked.
Ponyville now has their very own guard dragon.
Watch out Everfree!
I was waiting for this ship to happen! Now the prophecy is complete!
We demand more!
This story could use a bit of slap hearted slap stick like the standard discovering uncontrollably new strength that causes medium scale destruction trope, but other than that it was very well done and look forward to what happens next.
interesting
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I plan on addressing that asap but this is only the first chapter. I got the second one in production as you read this.
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He's not that big. Although you do raise a good idea.
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That's the reason I did this pairing: it hasn't really been done before... at least I havn't seen that many.
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The kitchen sink, you say??? Hmm, you've given me something to think about...
I will pay you in souls if you make it more shippy.
SOULS.
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Oh, this will get shippy alright. VERY shippy, not cloppy (hopefully I can keep my mind out of the gutter, but sex will be joked about profusely).
This is only the first chapter remember, I'm sticking to the idea of love that builds up. It will get increasingly shippy over time but there will be many complications in between.
Saw this updated, I just went M Bison in my head. YES! YES!
What?
Pfft, this was an excellent chapter. And, like you said, now we get to move on... ;D
After Screaming at the top of my lungs the full M Bison YES! YES! i settled down o read the second chapter.
After passing out from a awesome overload at the end of the chapter. i sit and ponder? where is rarity now? is she still MIA?
this is an amazing story.
I say old chap, its fantastic.
I cant wait for a spiffing third chapter.
keep up the good show old boy.
What are you talking about?? I can't wait for more!
We're getting to the good stuff!?!
:mbisonyes:
Will track when I login.
four brightly colored hoofcuffs Pfft HaHaHa
25170 I for one, am not surprised...
More. ASAP. Dunno whats so bad about, I'm def keeping an eye on this one.
Believe me, this chapter is good for the fic overall.
Everything has 'chapters' or 'scenes' like these, where character development and exploring each other take precedence over intense action or romance scenes.
How would Boromir's death had felt if he had never talked with Aragorn in either of the two elf cities?
If your reader can't sit through one chapter of establishing a relationship (ESPECIALLY BETWEEN 2 CHARACTERS WHO ALMOST NEVER INTERACT IN THE SHOW), then you probably shouldn't be too worried about losing them in the first place.
Keep up the good work.
YES! YES!
Sir, I can assure you, you did NOT lose me (or anyone else if I can punch the ungrateful bastards back in line).
Very well written and compelling in every sense of the word. I really like the way Rainbow acts embarassed while at the same time being offensive and teasing herself. You really nailed her character, and I love you for it.
I expect great things from this (especially after this terrific setup) and eagerly await your next chapter.
Hit the keyboard and deliver!
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You make a good point but I don't know who Boromir is. In any case, the reason I'm not all that happy with the chapter is that... I'm a bit 'OCD' when it comes to what I write. For me, it was like a non-event. Barely even any character building (although it does accomplish a bit of friend-shipping). Thankfully this chapter is now complete and details do not need to be said again. The next chapter will have a few weeks time skip (not giving anything away).
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Bah, you never read/watched Lord of the Rings?
Oh well. It's just that the little blurb at the end of the chapter sounded very distressed. No need to fret over a chapter like this. It's a 'necessary evil' almost.
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Seriously?
LOTR?
Helloooooooo...
Training montauge complete.
Returning to the plot in 3...
2...
1...
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I wouldn't call it an evil.
Honestly, I had fun this chapter. It's nice to see character developement in stories. I'll be keeping my eye on this.
This is a very well-written introduction to what I know will be a great story. I'm glad that you didn't just slam two characters together in a love-at-first-sight story and chose instead to create slower pace. I look forward to the upcoming chapters.
Hmm. I can see why some wouldn't really like this chapter. For one, when you compare it to the first chapter, there is little actual character building and is instead traded off for character interaction. Whereas, the first chapter shows the reader the relationship between Twilight and Spike, the second chapter focuses mainly on the physical interaction between Spike and Rainbow Dash. From an objective point of view, one can see that while the overall writing style has stayed the same, the differences between the two are apparent. However, this is not to say that this chapter is disappointment in any way, shape, or form. In my opinion, you nailed each character's personalities (ponyalities, dragonalities?), created a realistic setting, and even added a touch of humor as well ( the part with the hard, pink object made me go "wat?" for a second, and the handcuffs were hilarious). Additionally, I believe that this part is necessary to create a sort of base (Spike's respect for RD's flight abilities) where the relationship can blossom from. I look forward to the next few chapters.
Rainbow Dash and Rainbow Dash?
GASP
Short, but great chapter!
*Throws money at the screen*
YES! YES!
Story continues to interest; Fernin continues to read. And apparently to comment in the third person.
FTW
I keep throwing money at the screen and nothing happens. Great story, I FUCKING love the pacing in this, you give just enough to appease the readers without playing your trump card to early- I respect that. Other than that it's well written, funny, emotional, lighthearted, descriptive and the characters stay in character. Just plain fun to read.
side note: I'm actually surprised by all the updates today given that Skyrim just came out and Saints Row 3 is out this Monday.
Peace Out.
YESH! YESH!
Ha! Man, this is awesome. Keep up the badassery that is this story!
30155 Did you spot an error? I don't actually check most of this. Frankly, I'm surprised I'm not making more mistakes.