I DEMAND MOAR AND LONGER CHAPTERS!!!!!!! if thats okay with you

There's a few spelling errors here and there, but good chapter in all.

UAUAHHAUAHAHJAAUUHAHAHAUUA MOAR

Not bad, i love it.
MORE!!!!!

OMG this looks as if it will develop into such a good story!

Wonderful but time will tell if he pussies out of this story or keep making it awesome

More please also when should the next chapter be out

This has potential to be a fantastic tale. This is the first thing I've read that incorporates humanity into equestria without ruining the story or making it suck. I can't wait for more.
P.S you get ten awesome points for making a Halo reference :P

Good, MORE!

I really like this story!

So he's that last human and lives forever?

So it's kinda like in infection where the last man standing gets a shield

4893556 I think, he using a new kind technology make him became god.

There is only one thing that bothers me about this story. If it is an anthro Equestria then he would just look like a "pony" and wouldnt be a creature as they call him in the story. Other than that this is a great story and i cant wait to see where it leads.

If his suit can survive a fucking nuclear bomb and keep him immortal, they how the hell does a manticore give him trouble? Sub-Par story so far, would not recommend. And last time I checked the main six were not this dumb.

4976954 that was the claim made by the designers, who died centuries ago, so even if he maintained his suit perfectly it would still loss alot of it protective capabilities due to purely ageing of the metals. Or at least I think that would happen. And also the armour doesn't give him immortality it was some other form of technology that did it.

i like the book just not the anthor part but have fun with and i read it

This guy is very stupid for a thousands years old soldier.

i can imagine this line

what are you

im a god

LOL

He witnesses worlds being born and is centuries old, and yet is still an idiot -_-

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4889465. And I quote he said nothing short of a nuclear blast would hurt him while in the suit but than a manicores claws slice thourgh it like paper and i bet later in the story theyll show his armor with standing something stronger than this watch i bet it will. Has potential but you seem to force plot progess and its annoying

6388116 he can dodge a manicore tail because of centuries of training but not applejack and he has a underground castle but fuck it throw in a front door and window in a cave that in 2000 years has never been seen why? Because plot thats why

Hey when are you going to repost the rest of of the chapters?

Update plz! Good story, need moar!