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What Lurks in the Shadows?

Having been banished for second time. Sombra begins his journey of revenge. Continuing his rein of terror.

Thanks to LoveWishes for the story idea.

Chapters (6)

prologue · 17th Aug 2014 · 206 words
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Chapter 1- The Beginning · 17th Aug 2014 · 377 words
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Chapter 2- The Forest · 17th Aug 2014 · 304 words
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Chapter 3- Fear · 17th Aug 2014 · 396 words
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Chapter 4- A Meeting · 19th Aug 2014 · 697 words
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Chapter 5 - Taken · 15th Sep 2014 · 619 words
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ChingKittyCat

ChingKittyCat #1 · Aug 17th, 2014 · · · Chapter 3- Fear ·

Here's what I'd suggest. Keep your chapters over or at least 1,000 words. The story is okay, though I'm kind of wondering why Sombra didn't let Zecora gaze into her worst fears, or really do anything. Bit of a tease for me, it really is.

Arts Desire

Arts Desire #2 · Aug 19th, 2014 · · · Chapter 4- A Meeting ·

I am more of a short chapter/story writer, so the chapters aren't going to be very long. Also, Sombra was banished and there for would not have such strength for much.

ChingKittyCat