• Published 24th Apr 2012
  • 4,992 Views, 94 Comments

Fall to Equestria - doomboom1234



the story of a simple human in a world of magical pony from the beginning to the end.

Comments ( 4 )

......*shake head*...
Really? no kidding...Really?
Alright...listen..ummm well, I don't know how to say this.
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edit: the story ending so quickly.

Goodbye, and thanks for the story and the permission to keep it alive if we so wish

I LOVE THIS STORY !!!!! THERE IS SO MUCH LOVE TO BE HAD !!!!! THIS IS THE WAY IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE IN EQUESTRIA !!!!! BUT !!! you seriously need an editor. SO MANY misspelled words. it made the story VERY hard to read. and it's such a good story, to say the least. it is such a marvelous story.

It was a lovely fanfic and loved that every mare went for him but I do think it had to be a bit longer sinds he somehow knew who chrysalis was but still loved reading it and don't worry about the grammer I only saw few small mistakes :heart:

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