• Member Since 29th Mar, 2012
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LucidTech


A language written in a trickling style that dribbles like caramel off the innumberable facets of the world and come to rest here, under my username. Also I'm super pretentious sometimes.


Comments ( 2 )

It's very... choppy for lack of a better word. You really need to work on how smoothly the story flows because right now it feels like I'm driving down an old pothole filled dirt road. It makes it very confusing even for the most intelligent.

It's a very interesting idea. Maybe you should try some non fanfiction. I think that would be neat.

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