Explanations And Blah Blah Blah
It was a nice pleasant walk as Jason walked toward town with Applejack. They hadn’t spoken since he agreed to go with her, which was good, it allowed him to think things over a bit. He was stuck in a world of miniature talking horses with an Omnitrix on his wrist. It both terrified and excited him.
“Oh there you are!” a familiar voice called out. He looked off to the left, seeing the yellow pegasus from before flying over to them.
“Oh are you okay? Did that meanie Rainbow Dash hurt you?” she asked, looking him over before giving him a hug.
“Um... yeah I’m fine...” Jason said, not exactly sure what was going on right now.
“Oh! Y-you can talk?” she asked letting go of his head, hovering back a bit.
“Says his name is Jason.” Applejack spoke up, watching him closely.
“It’s nice to meet you Ms..?” Jason asked, looking at the pegasus, who hid behind her pink mane.
“F-fluttershy...” she whispered back, peeking out at him.
“Like I said, nice to meet you Ms. Fluttershy.” He said giving her his best smile.
“Oh um... it’s just Fluttershy... I’m not married...”
“Ok, Fluttershy.”
“Get away from her!” a voice suddenly shouted, knocking him out of his thoughts. He looked up, only to have something slam into his chest sending him tumbling.
“Are you okay, Applejack dear?” A rather high class voice asked, obviously a friend of the orange mare.
“What is wrong with you ponies? Attacking somepony for no reason!” Fluttershy scolded, moving over to Jason. “Oh my, are you all right Jason?”
“Yeah... I’m fine... just knocked the wind out of me...” Jason said groaning, blinking a bit.
“What’s wrong with us?!” Rainbow Dash asked, sounding indignant. “What’s wrong with you? That’s a changeling spy!”
“Rainbow Dash, that isn’t a changeling.” A new pony, this one purple, spoke up. “That’s a human.”
“Whats a hyew-man?” A pink pony asked, her mane looking twisted and tangled.
“You girls remember those creatures I told you about? Back when I went through that mirror?” The purple pony asked, to which the others nodded. “Well those are humans. Though that doesn’t explain why he’s here.”
“So you are a spy!” Rainbow Dash declared, glaring at Jason, who just rolled his eyes at her.
“I am not a spy, I don’t even know where I am,” he responded, glaring back at her. He glanced at the Omnitrix, relief filling him as he saw that glorious green glow.
“Oh yeah? Then how did you change into that weird bug thing?” she asked, flying up into his face.
“Back off,” he said, pushing her away. “I can turn into other things with this,” he said, holding up his right arm to show them the Omnitrix. “Like I already told Applejack, this is the Omnitrix. It allows me to turn into any number of creatures.”
“Do you believe him Applejack?” the purple one asked, her eyes locked on the omnitrix.
“Ah reckon he’s tellin’ the truth. ‘Sides, it’d be wrong of us to not give him a chance.” Applejack said, bringing a smile to Jason’s face.
“Ok, we’ll give you a chance, but if it turns out that you are a changeling, then I’ll send you to Tartarus myself,” the purple one said, glaring at Jason.
“You got it boss lady.” Jason replied with a nod, looking at her.
“Good, now let’s go back to the library, the princesses should be here shortly,” she said, starting to lead the group back into town.
Jason sighed, shaking his head before starting to follow the herd of ponies, stuffing his hands into his pockets.
****
If the day hadn’t already been weird, the sight of a town full of colorful ponies was something he’d never thought he’d see. They took one look at him and started to scatter, either hiding in their homes or behind the nearest object.
“Don’t mind them dear, they tend to overreact to new things.” The white unicorn informed Jason, noting the frown on his face.
“Yeah...” he said, shoving his hands into his pockets.
Soon they came to a tree house, a literal tree with a house made out of its trunk. The most amazing part though, was that the tree was still alive. He walked inside, gazing around in wonder.
“Ahem.” the purple pony said, drawing Jason’s attention. “Now then, let’s get introductions out of the way. I am Twilight Sparkle,” she said, pointing to herself. “You’ve already met Rainbow Dash, Applejack and Fluttershy.”
“Hi!” The crazy looking pink pony shouted, somehow appearing next to Jason.
“Oh god!” Jason shouted, jumping up, starting at the pony with wide eyes.
“I’m Pinkie Pie and it’s SSSOOO nice to meet you!” she shouted, striking a pose and throwing confetti out of her mane.
“Please excuse Pinkie Pie dear, she can get very loud,” the white unicorn said, walking over to Jason. “I am Rarity, it’s a pleasure to make your acquaintance,” she said, holding her hoof out.
“I’m Jason, it’s nice to meet you too,” he said, shaking her hoof, making it a point to not use his Omnitrix arm.
“Well it’s nice to meet you all, my name is Jason Hughes,” he said with a nod before standing back up.
“Now that we have that out of the way, tell us more about that, what did you call it? Omnitrax?” Twilight asked.
“The Omnitrix.” Jason corrected, sitting cross-legged on the floor.
“So it allows you to transform into other life forms?” she asked, starting to write things down.
“Yeah, I think the exact count was...1,000,911...no wait! Make that 1,000,913, since the Omnitrix scanned Applejack and Rainbow Dash.”
“T-thats a lot,” Twilight said, looking up from her scroll, her eyes a bit wide.
“Well at the most, I have about... 67 of those unlocked...” Jacob said, looking down at the Omnitrix.
“Hey, I got a question.” Rainbow Dash spoke up, an angry look on her face. “What do you mean by scanned me?”
“Well, when the Omnitrix detects DNA that isn’t catalogued, it scans it and adds it to the collection,” Jason explained.
“What's DNA?” Twilight asked scribbling away. She looked up after a few seconds, frowning when Jason didn’t answer. He just sighed, running his hands down his face.
“Ok, how the hell do I explain this?” He asked, leaning back on the wall. “Okay, DNA, or deoxyribonucleic acid, is the stuff all living things are made of. It’s so small you need special microscopes to see it. Basically, it’s the blueprint of an organism. Most creatures get half their DNA from their mother and half from their father.”
He couldn’t help but grin as he watched the pony scribble faster on her parchment.
“So now that Applejack and Rainbow Dash’s DNA are in the Omnitrix, that means you can become a Pegasus and an Earth Pony?”
“Yup,” he said, nodding his head.
“Ooh ooh!” Pinkie said, jumping up and down, waving a hoof in the air.
“Yes Pinkie?” Twilight asked with a sigh, looking at her hyper friend. Pinkie always had to interrupt when things were getting good.
“Since you got AJ and Dashie’s DNA stuff, does mean you're related to them? Cause if you are that means you're related to me! I can throw you a ‘Welcome to the Apple/Pie family party!’”
“Well... that’s actually a good question...” Jason said, looking at Pinkie, blinking a bit.
“Why don’t you try turning into a pony now?” Twilight asked, her curiosity piqued.
“I’ll try,” Jason said, popping the dial of the Omnitrix up, turning it this way and that until he found the silhouette he was looking for. “Here goes nothing,” he said bringing his palm down on the dial.
There was a flash and the human was replaced with an Earth Pony stallion. He stood almost as tall as Big Mac, his coat matched the green of the Omnitrix, his mane and tail black. Resting on his barrel was the Omnitrix.
“Well, what do you guys think?” he asked, his voice in similar tone to Big Mac’s, looking at their faces expectantly.
“He does have a resemblance, Applejack,” Rarity responded first, looking Jason over. “I must say Jason, you make a rather strapping stallion.”
“Ah guess this does make ya an Apple...” AJ said, rubbing her chin, looking him over.
“How long do these transformations last?” Twilight asked, in an attempt to get things back on topic.
“About 15 minutes give or take. I’ll be able to stay transformed indefinitely if I can figure out the master controls,” he said, touching the Omnitrix and reverting to normal.
Twilight was about to inquire further when Princess Celestia and Princess Luna teleported in with a golden flash. Celestia was as calm as ever, though Luna was dressed in black armor, a warhammer on her side.
“Greetings Twilight, I apologize for being so late to respond to your letter but Luna decided to don her armor,” Celestia said, giving her sister a slight glare.
“One must be prepared for battle my dear sister,” Luna said, holding her head up proudly.
“Thank you for coming, but I’m afraid it was a bit of a false alarm,” Twilight said, smiling at her mentor.
Luna seemed to deflate, a pout on her face. “Are you quite sure Twilight Sparkle?”
“Well maybe not, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, this is Jason Hughes,” she said, introducing the human. Jason just gulped, hoping that this wasn’t going to kill him.
***
“So you're saying this Omnitrix isn’t a weapon?” Celestia asked, sipping at her tea. The past fifteen minutes had been full of tension, as Luna was ready to beat the poor human into submission. Most of the others had gone home, with the lack of any danger they didn’t really feel needed.
Currently, the four of them were sitting in the library, drinking some tea.
“No, its creator’s intent was for its user to walk in the shoes of other races. It’s hard to hate someone when you’ve been them,” Jason said, taking a gulp of tea.
“And what do you plan to do now?” Luna asked, eyeing the human warily.
“I don’t really know. I don’t have a way home or any place to stay,” he said, looking down into his cup and sighing. Just thinking about not being able to go home sent a chill
“I think I can help with that,” Celestia said, gracing him with a smile. “You may stay here in Ponyville, on one condition.”
“What?” he inquired, tilting his head a bit.
“You will study under my former student and learn what it means to be a pony, that is if Twilight Sparkle agrees.”
“Yes yes yes!” Twilight said, jumping to her hooves, dancing around in excitement. “I’m going to learn so much!”
“Well then, we shall leave you in Twilight’s capable hooves, Mr. Hughes. I’m giving you a big opportunity, please don’t disappoint me,” she said before she and Luna vanished in a flash.
Jason let out a sigh of relief, a smile forming on his face as he watched Twilight dance around. “Maybe... maybe this won’t be so bad after all...”
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If he gets a Draconequus scan then I suggest Hodge-Podge
4862217 I was going to go with Pandemonium but that works better.
Hmm, interesting idea. I think I'll follow!
4862228
I would only choose that if he found a panda. Almost everything is sentient in Equestria, yes? He could totally be a sumo-wrestler panda. A++ if you get that to work out in the story!
Loving the story by the way, Although, is this the Omnitrix v1, or v2? Because at the point of 1, he DID have a lot of transformations, but Big Chill was not one of them, yet you have a picture of v1 as the profile. Don't let this bother you if you have plans set in stone already, I just have CDO
4862347 His omnitrix just looks like the original, it has all the features of Ben's current one, plus the evolving feature from the Ultimatrix. I will keep his aliens up to date with Ben's though.
by fun, do you mean twilight strapping you to a table and analyzing you? if thats a yes, then you're gonna have a blast!
if not, run like hell tot the nearest gamma reactor (aka: the hulk)
Ur in capable HANDS???? What? how do they know what hands even r?
Hooves.
4862393 Well, seeing as how they have minotaurs, I'd imagine at least Celestia knows what they are, but yeah that was a typo/error.
4862369
Excellente! Keep up the good work!
Hey, where does the 67 aliens come from, according to the wiki, Ben has 62 unlocked forms and 68 named ones (A few mentioned by Ben 10,000) so what other aliens are you including?
4862570 It's a miss count on my part to be fair.
god dammit another fucking lohav
jesus h q puf'n'stuf christ, they're everywhere
4862682 Actual he's not a villain, nor do I plan on him becoming one.
4862686 they're never villains
Just Gary stus
man he should have shaken Celestia's hoof! or discords! oh I can only see what would happen then :)
4862781 Don't worry, all will be scanned at some point!
Not bad. But sooooo many proofreading errors. I'm guessing you used spellcheck, but didn't bother to check to see the the changes it made, since spellcheck tends to have multiple options when fixing words and it doesn't check the grammar used in the sentences it fixes. Common mistake online.
4862849 I actually use Google docs, which is normally pretty reliable.
4862881 Apparently not as reliable as expected, eh? XD Still, decent start. And no doubt, Twilight is gonna enjoy studying the various aliens, eh?
Also, does his alien list include all those from Omniverse too?^_^
4862900 Yup, all of them, plus the ultimate evolutions and whatever forms he picks up in equestria.
4862917 Excellent.^^
This is promising. Can't wait to see the Omnitrix scan Spike... Hehe.
This is a ridiculous piece of shit, just like all the rest of the LoHAVs.
4862405
Irony. They say hands in the show. Listen close at Dragonshy (which is the only example episode I can name. another few have Rarity saying hands.) when the ponies are lined up.
btw Earth Pony's name should be Overhaul or Hoofbeat. I got nothing for Pegasus Jason.
I'm sorry, I like this idea but I don't like the way this is looking. Jason is in no way villainous. If anything this looks like the start of a heroic human story. Plus the Omnitrix automatically makes him OP, even more so once he gets the DNA samples for Alicorns, Draconequui, Centaurs, and Changelings. Then once he unlocks the Master Control there's no stopping him. Alien X is literally omnipotent, and the only thing holding him back is the alternate personalities.
Please tell me this omnitrix is of the troll-y kind. Those first season transformation shenanigans were the best.
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Just FYI, you DO know that DJSkywalker already made a ben ten story for LoHAV right?
4864525 Thats why this is a LOHAH story and not a LOHAV story.
My current issues are OOCness and a rushing factor. An example of the rushing factor is how Jason got transported from the convention to Equestria without even a thought on how he got there or having any emotions like panic and confusion. Two examples of OOCness are when Twilight threatens to abuse her power to send someone to Tartarus (Celestia and Luna would NOT do that unless the situation called for it, which only means Tirek and stuff like him. And even then, Twilight wouldn't abuse her powers, and would more likely wonder IF she's abusing them when she's barely using them at all. And sending a possible changeling to Tartarus? Really? They already punched the hive in the face and practically made them starve (as stupid as Chrysalis's plan was), why would they send them to Tartarus? Even the Olympian Gods wouldn't do that to anyone unless they found something that called for it (aka Kronos). Besides, if Twilight never uses Celestia's name in some kind of 'swear' such as "By Celestia" and In the name of "Celestia", I doubt she would threaten anybody with TARTARUS! Yes, I am mad about this.) and how Fluttershy wouldn't jump in to help a possible 'animal' from her friends who are trying to hurt it (if a bunny, something at the bottom of the food chain, could warrant the Stare, I'm pretty sure a sentient being, meaning a human or a pony, would warrant it as well...) and instead rushes into it like it actually IS a changeling (I'm pretty sure she had trouble fighting THOSE!) and how Applejack (who would be asking Jason to get off of her property, would be suspicious of lies and the like, and would keep the possibility of him actually being something dangerous in mind in case he IS a changeling (meaning she's at least a little suspicious) is without suspicion at all and would help him when Fluttershy, FLUTTERSHY, won't. Yes, the OOCness DOES bug me, but I'll keep it on hold for now until it gets outrageous. And the rushing factor is more preference in my opinion, though it should be kept in mind. Otherwise, good job, this is rather unique in my opinion as I have not seen a single crossover between a Ben 10 element and MLP:FiM. I'll be watching this story, and I hope it will both improve and last, and not fall into shambles like so many other stories that are really good and have not been updated in two years. (PS: Also, what about the Ultimatrix and the Ultimate forms? It seems more likely for an alicorn to be the ultimate form of the pony races rather than it's own alien 'card'. And what about Rarity? She's a unicorn, and you havn't scanned those yet. And why hasn't the appearance of Celestia and a mysterious creature not sparked the interest of the town? In fact, just WHERE are they in Ponyville?) (PSS: My comments can be this long... Sorry, but if it's not your slice of cake, deal with it.)
4864702 They were in the library talking to Celestia and Luna, as this takes place before the season 4 finale. The omnitrix will allow him to use the ultimate forms from the ultimatrix. I do plan on redoing the first two chapters when I get more comfortable with the flow of the story.
4864736 liked and faved!!!
So how long is it going to take for him to go grey matter and unlock the controls. Ben never did it on screen but his alternate future son did so Jason should know the trick.
4864842 I've been wondering if I should do that but I haven't decided yet.
4864674
Sorry, I jumped the gun and didn't actually look at the group listing. I stand by my statement that the Omnitrix is OP.
4864736 Oh. Okay. That's actually... REALLY good. Thanks for that. :D Keep up the good work and for clearing up that time gap!
4864595
Why did I get downvoted? I'm just saying.
The idea of the story is really good,
But it's a little fast for my taste, I'll stay and see what happens. 
I liked to see where this goes.
Also would it be possible for a future cross over between heroes?
4865282 Sure, I'm open to crossovers.
4864857 Save it for a last resort when he gets the omnitrix back from the future villain. Whoever the person going after the game breaking watch is going to be.
yes, u are good at making up for gaps, and my suggestion for his earth pony form would be pureshining, for his pegasus form, blazingstreack
Hm… I fave, if only to see where this goes. I expect big things.
Yes, finally another Ben ten/My Little Pony crossover. I can't wait to see more of this, fave/like
4864432 I knew that already.
>>The Hood
When I started reading this fan-fiction, my first thought was:
"Ah Ben Ten, such a wonderful part of my childhood. Until whatever the heck this was happened.
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My sister and I couldn't believe our eyes! Ben was-gimme a sec I gotta throw up. *Blaaarph*... Anyway, as I was saying, he became ma-*Blrrrrph*, *cough*... I think I just coughed up some stomach acid. Anyway he became... Mature! How could this happen! And I never watched the show again. Until Omniverse came up. I have to admit, it was ok. I could watch and episode or two a day, and deciding for Gwen and Kevin to be replaced by Rook was accepted by me, I kind of liked him. But people need to learn how to end a good show, or else it just turns terrible. (The Avatar and Dragon Ball Z are examples of knowing when to end a good show.) Like the new Omnitrix for the new shows. WHY WOULD I WANT TO BUY A BEN TEN ACTION FIGURE JUST SO I CAN TAKE 5 FLIPPIN MINUTES TO PUT THE STUPID FIGURINE ON THE DANG LIGHT AND SOUND WRISTBAND... The Omnitrix toy from the first gen was much better.
(Please do correct me if I'm getting mad at "Alien Force" for no reason.)
4866201 I think the main problem with ben 10 is that they play fast and loose with continuity and that pisses me off. They made Race Against Time, even if it was a sucky movie, pointless besides Eon but they just explain that in about 5 seconds. The oringal Ben 10,000 episode got handwaved as an "alternate future" and Ghostfreak got brought back in Alien Force without any explanation or given reason.
Well it was interesting in the first chapter but this second one seems to have brought it dangerously close to the abyss of terrible HiE cliches and gimmicks that so many writers tumble into. Still gonna watch to see where it goes. Also:
*That's a human.