• Member Since 17th May, 2014
  • offline last seen Aug 26th, 2018

zeldafand


I am a serious brony, i am christian and PROUD OF IT! I am not the best writer, but I do my best. And My OC is no longer an Alicorn.

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This is the story of the time i was watching TV, and then i was suddenly in Equestria. it was an adventure i will never forget!
WARNING: VORE!

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This has got to be a trollfic. Nobody still writes these, right?

Right?

This is the story of the time i was watching TV, and then i was suddenly in Equestria. it was an adventure i will never forget!
DISCLAIMER: I Suck at writing as many Ponies, (I can say that if I want to Commander Fowler!) Have previously stated in the comments from my last story, and because I suck so badly, Negative comments are not allowed, because they'd be too obvious. Positive comments are encouraged, but you don't have to comment at all if you don't want to. Yes I know, I suck and I'm stupid and shouldn't even be on this site to begin with, but i am only writing this mostly for MY entertainment. I just post it here because I feel like it. Also, there is vore, so if you don't like it, Don't read it.

4850677 My god.

Also, there is vore, so if you don't like it, Don't read it.

Fuck-fuck-fuck-fuck

Abandon ship!

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Just kill me already, you sadastic bastard!

Why should people go any easier on you just because you admit you suck? It doesn't make you much better.

Just because a murderer confesses to his crime of murderer doesn't mean he didn't kill someone.

Guys, be careful. Last time this guy got genuinely helpful criticism, he removed all our comments and called us all Internet trolls.

Edit: I've just noticed the crack at Commander Fowler who was one of the people who took his time to help.

4850744 Vores fine, but the way he put it in the desc... uurhggh

4850672 I write trollfics. But they're internet jokes.. Not.. Whatever the fuck this horror is.

I'm fairly certain this is a troll fic, but not the regular type of troll fic. He's not doing this to make fun of people who make self insert stories like this, he's doing it to trick you into reading this and laughing at your idiocy for wasting your time reading such a stupid fic.

You are... literally the worst. Not only have you not taken any of the critique of your last story to heart, you managed to produce something in a genre people are more fed up with than fanfic spinoffs.

Also, teen fic with vore. What.

Comment posted by IncinerateChicken deleted Aug 14th, 2014

Ohoohoohoo! This rustles my jimmies! For my first bad fanfic, this is quite the piece of shit!

Bravo! :pinkiehappy:

I am also too lazy to fix mistakes that are not required to get a story onto this site. No negative criticism!

Negative comments are not allowed, because they'd be too obvious.

Also, there is vore

This is all the evidence I need. Trollfic, troll account.

I think you've gained quite a following.....of haters.

4850785 It's a sexual fetish of being swallowed alive.

I have nothing new to say at this point. I've seen far too many stories like this recently, and I'm beginning to think people are making this stuff and deleting comments just to start controversy.

I praise you for writing what you want to write (if this is indeed a serious story), but perhaps using more original setups or characters would be more effective? For example, let's say you get transported to Equestria as a socially feared zebra, or a Breezie? You know, just something to shake things up.

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I thought it was a misspelled term for gore.

But thanks for the answer!

I Suck at writing as many Ponies, (I can say that if I want to Commander Fowler!) Have previously stated in the comments from my last story, and because I suck so badly, Negative comments are not allowed, because they'd be too obvious. Positive comments are encouraged, but you don't have to comment at all if you don't want to. Yes I know, I suck and I'm stupid and shouldn't even be on this site to begin with, but i am only writing this mostly for MY entertainment. I just post it here because I feel like it. Also, there is vore, so if you don't like it, Don't read it.

No. No, no no No!
You listen to me, if you so suck at writing. Why you post your fics in a public site? If your don't want criticism at all, keep the fucking fic to yourself. So please, stop posting.

EDIT:
My god, what was I thinking when I posted this?

Worse thing is, I wasn't even thinking about anything I posted, I just said it to join the hate bandwagon. And who and most importantly, why this has likes?

The story is pretty bad in itself tho, no question.

I honestly don't want you to stop posting the stories. The comments here are AWESOME! Plus you did something that I didn't expect: you ticked off DE_K.

Comment posted by Lokimen deleted Aug 14th, 2014

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Heh, just the few times I've seen you comment you seem to never be that type of person to be ticked.

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Are you two prepared for the mass deleting of comments.

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No I check out the new fics a lot and see you every once in awhile.

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I have no idea but I'm going to be as prepared as I can for the tantrum that comes when he is on.

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Not in the past 2 hours.

We must use our time wisely...

oh, another troll fic/ innocent teenage writer with a mediocre story. This kinda thing is here all the time, no need to make a fuss-

Also, there is vore, so if you don't like it, Don't read it.

wait, what?

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I only know a few other bad fanfic writers that did the same thing of throwing tantrums, but that was loooooong ago.

Anyway, LET THE BLOG POSTS BEGIN!

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Gather comrades, for we shall prepare for the onslaught of hate from the author.

FOR EQUESTRIA!!!

If he/she/it is trolling us meh.

But if not and he/she/it has a meltdown it's going to be glorious:eeyup:

I like how this turned from a horrible story to an amazing comment section, sort of like Felixdawn or Theater's sections.

Alright,

Shovels...check

Barrels...check

Pitch forks...check

Dang it! We still need torches!

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The Peanut Gallery is the best part of these things; it's the only reason to come to bad stories like this. Provides some interesting conversation.

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Hey, you have any torches? I'm running a little low.

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I have the torches, but it's only for burning shitty alicorn OCs and flame wars.


Fuck it, here. *gives torches*

Surprising as it may seem, this guy might actually not be kidding around here. He might actually be this terrible at writing and this big a horse's ass. It's hard for normal folks to conceive of this, but there are some truly dumb...dumb...DUMB people in this world that have no ability to discern the inanity of their words/actions...otherwise they wouldn't be dumb at all. Take, for example, that "edgar...egar...Igor...whoever the fuck the cool kid." That guy was actually serious.

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