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Rinnaul


I do nothing of merit. On occasion, I give the impression of being creative, but this is a deception. I am merely derivative in clever ways.

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I'm glad you didn't go with rape; he's plenty vile without that, and what happens to the poor pony is violation enough without it. Still, a well-characterised malefactor in such a short story. Good job.

I'm going to upvote this because it was well written and conveyed what it meant to; but holy fucking shit that was disturbing.

yellow coat and pink mane

oh fuck for everyone if it's fluttershy
Oh fuck anyway if it's anypony else.


5049577 Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep.

5051217

It's not Fluttershy. Know how I know? NO CHARACTER TAG.

Please, don't be Fluttershy. :fluttercry:

5051236 there are plenty of reasons i can think of that flutters wouldn't be there
and i am scared

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I considered tagging her, but then decided the victim should remain anonymous. I don't generally like offing canon ponies just for shock value.

So, if she shows up in To Be The King, you'll know it wasn't her.

5051272

Well, I was gonna read it, anyway, but now I have to make sure that Fluttershy is safe ... :fluttercry:

How entertaining. Dinner and a show. This story makes me nostalgic.

Honestly speaking the fact that this is fluttershy bothers me on a logical level.
Fluttershy lives in the litteral definition of bat country. a dangerous fuck land is her back yard, and she regularly tangos with all kinds of predators, airboarn or just so tall as to strike from the sky anyway. Seeing this twat basket of a griffon act so holier than though against someone who's probably more versed in the natural way than he is makes this come across as increadibly ham handed and lacking perspective on the chosen prey. any mare could have stood in fluttershys place and it would have been fine. but this is where you took a workable concept and then proceeded to cripple it with a cudgel.

And then the stupid, savage animal was slaughtered by the townsfolk. Yay! Happy ending!

And then he died. /Cinema Snob

What a miserable pile of garbage with a garbage star. Just pure, unadulterated garbage.

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Wow, shit, that was terrifying @_@

Ohh very chilling. I like the POV of the griffen here, he really rationalizes his utter insanity lol

I fail to see why anyone who considers themselves a part of the fandom would even consider writing something like this. I mean honestly it's sickening and seems to be a rising trend. It's alright though. Just another garbage story to down vote and another writer I won't be following. Good day.

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It's okay. I fail to why sometimes, too.

8028280
Very amusing indeed.

People might find Gaspard's behavior more unsettling than the actual gore.

That's as good of a warning as I'm going to get. To be honest, I don't like hunting, but my final attitudes are based on the hunter's motivations, and attitudes towards the prey. There are, essentially, reasons that I respect, usually involving respect given towards the prey.

I have a feeling Gaspard is totally devoid of anything I might respect. And for some reason, vile people disgust me more vile actions.

Not ruling out the possibility of reading this, but I don't like reading about unpleasant things for its own sake, and it will likely be after I read To Be the King, should I get around to that. And probably once TBtK gets a few more chapters as well.

Wow that was awesome it's a shame that there aren't more story's that involve Griffins eating ponies if there where that would be neat

I wish you had more rape, still a good story nonetheless! ;)

While the content is dark, it is also well-written. Thumbs up.

A great story that didn’t deserve the hate it got

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