Anon In Equestria Story
The year is 1943 and World War Two rages on. Axis forces are starting to exhaust their supply's of iron. In a desperate attempt to get back in the war Germany launches an attack to conquer Greenland. Seeing Nazi Germany's aggression's Canada launches a mission to defend Greenland from the German invasion. After fighting over the Arctic for iron deposits, Anon a 24 year old RCAF pilot awakens in northern Equestria after being frozen for four million years. The only items that can remind him of humanity is himself and his beloved spitfire. (The plane of course.)
**Warning**
This story by all means is not historically accurate. The only things that are accurate in this story 'history wise' is the information given for the Supermarine Spitfire MK VB. As for physics and other sciency stuff I try to explain why things that should kill you don't.
Anon x Spitfire story
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I'm pretty sure there wasn't enemy forces in Greenland in WWII.
There WAS however, German forces in Norway...that's a pretty snowy place...
Also: "If your attack goes to well, it's probably an ambush."- U.S. Army Field Guide
Great story!Good job!
I haven't read the story yet, as it is sitting comfortably in my read later list.
Seeing as it is unread by me, I have no rights to criticise the story. Despite saying that, I will still implore you to give a name to your character. The word anon has its own definition that is completely separate from your use of the word: an abbreviation for anonymous. Quite frankly, if you are trying to make the main character be the reader, then write the story in first person (as you may have already done). So unless you are trying to say that something will happen anon, or soon, refrain from using the term altogether.
Thank you for reading through my comment, and I will make sure to tell you what I think when I give this a read.
cliffhangers are evil!!!!!!!
Me and my brother like his squad leader (
always good to see a man of the busters)you have My Curiosity i must have more.
This is interesting and I might read later, but my reason for comment is you said the "Submarine Spitfire MK VB" It's actually the Supermarine Spitfire. And you said RCAF which I'm assuming means Royal Canadian Air Force, the Spitfire is actually British, I don't know if you know this and it's just for the story but if you don't well there you go. I apologize for being so picky but I'm a military historian as well as a Marine and surplus collector so I have some field experience (not to toot my own horn). If you have any more questions or anything about military history or equipment or anything else message me and I will be more than happy to help.
GAH!!! CLIFFHANGERS!!!
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Canada was and still is a part of the Commonwealth, I'm sure we may have given them a few Spitfires at some point considering they supplied us with troops and supplies at points during the war.
4849140 Oh, I honestly did not know that, thank you.
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http://www.wingsforfreedom.com/Aircraft/aircraftDetail.php?SPITFIRE-52
Turns out ... we had a few.
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Although you make a valid point:
*Supermarine*, not 'Submarine'.
4849174 I saw that and my inner comedian said "The fuck? A plane underwater? How the fuck does that work?"
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James Bond
4849186 "The lord giveth and the lord taketh away." My point that is.
Not to be rude but I think the title should be "Fire and Ice" not "Ice and Fire". "Fire and Ice" kinda rolls off the tongue easier.
4849190 i think ice and fire sounds much better
4849254 I guess it's just a matter of opinion.
4849261 indeed
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4849270 yes
4849276 Very.
4849279 mhm
4849281 Exquisitely
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4849282 do you like bananas?
4849322 I'm a banana!
I'm a banana 
I'm a banana! 
I'm a banana 
4849328 i....see
4849392 Haven't you ever seen that video?
4849394 nope or i might have just cant remember
4849439 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nBINO0i5td0 Here, that oughta jog your memory.
4849450 thanks gonna see it right now
4849458 Sounds good.
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so you two are the reason I had 62 notifications XD
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kek. I laughed so hard when I read that then I went to fimfiction and wrote Supermarine and it says its a spelling error which i get so when i was proof reading I must of right click and turned one of the most memorable fighters in WW2 into a submarine. And yes I did some research this time and found out that Canada did have some spitfires back in WW2. If i do have any questions I will be sure to PM you.
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This was supposed to be a chapter in the story deciding if I should write more... Oh course their is going to be a cliffhanger like all trailers now in days >:3. However now I have strong feelings to keep Ice and Fire up.
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Glad you are liking the fimfic and the characters.
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I know there wasn't if you read the description it says this is all made up and non of it actually happened :P. Thanks for the support though.
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Will work on it.
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Long story shot when I was making this book I originally called it Fire and Ice, but when I was making the picture for the book i accidentally made Anon on the left instead of the right. Being the lazy person I am I just changed the name.
Plus I like how it refuses to roll off the tongue, makes the name more interesting. well like you said its a matter of opinion.
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Lastly thank you all for commenting on the story and for the support. With out you this story would be about a submarine spitfire XD.
4849877 I read that last part of the description after I commented... XD
Okay, I'll be honest. This was difficult to read all the way through. Many grammatical errors, awkward dialogue and strange word choices (like 'ground ponies', instead of 'earth ponies' at one point) make parts of this difficult to decipher.
The premise is interesting, but this first chapter wasn't great. I'll favourite and read the next chapter when it comes, but I don't know if I'll read this all the way to the end.
I don't usually read stories in second person, but this is good.
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More curiosity? Careful, too much of that stuff can kill cats.
I've seen so many Anon in Equestria fics and tumblers I keep waiting to meet someone in real life named Anon. That's prolly gonna be in the next generation, though.
Come on, you know SOMEBODY is going to do it!
Cool story man, cant wait for the next chapter
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I think in the beginning you meant couple kilometers away not meters. That would be about six feet, that's less then a wing span.
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Before I read is Anon part of the guard?
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The second part of this was very difficult to read. When writing in 2nd person, you need to pick one character from whose view to write. All the bits with a Spitfire should be in 3rd person, as it is there to fill in the audience on what's happening out of the characters' presence.
I'm going to follow this, as I find then premise intriguing; however I suspect it will become very confusing in sections involving both Anon and Spitfire.
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I googled it.. On Linkedin alone, there are 12 people named Anon Smith. And that's just one surname!
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pretty sure that they are ponies or atleast stallions considering that you said that they had hoofs. there are a few instances of you using men near by as well.
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Dam and here I thought I was getting better at saying stallion instead of men. Will fix it though, and thanks for telling me.
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Almost done chapter two. Will post it as soon as its done and proofread by myself.
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Very cool fact though.
So there is a potability someone named Anon is reading this story.
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Will do Sir
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Spoiler
No and I don't think he ever will be in this story. Sorry if that's what you wanted.
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Yes I do believe you are right, will fix.
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Nice to see that people are enjoying my story. Stay awesome.
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I agree with the spelling and grammatical errors. I will try my hardest to clean them up, as you may know proofreading your own work can help a lot, but there is also of stuff you will miss. I do have a proofreader, however I don't want to overload him with two story's.
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Hello everyone! In case you don't know, you can post corrections, ideas, thoughts...ect here in the comments. I usually post a comment when I'm done a chapter to let people know that their comment or comments have been read and I have thought about them. If you're shy that doesn't matter as you can always PM me.
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4887154 No, thats what I was scared of!