What on this good green earth was I thinking? Seriously, what? When you do a fic about a taboo subject of the parents of Big Mac, Applejack and Apple Bloom, I'm just begging for trouble.
Not only that, but to type this, the entire thing on my phone when my computer has been dead for weeks, with a new one taking half of forever to get here, something is bound to go horribly wrong.
Like this story for instance, a story about when Granny Smith is dying on her deathbed, Big Mac finally confesses a secret about what really happened on the day his parents were killed. Not only I can sense the negativity just suggesting that idea, but I can tell people on this site might hate me more because I'm basing the story on a theory from the Lizzie Borden ax murders.
And yet, why did I posted this out anyway? Probably those who would read it would be sadistic because I'm that stupid.
Honestly, what was I thinking!?!
A special thanks to SecretBrony01 for proofreading.
YouTube reading by Swift Blade Productions.
Nonsense! My entire story is written on my phone and I'm doin' fine!
Alright, then. That was interesting... I admit I didn't enjoy that. When the barn recollection came up I couldn't help but think, "Okay, that escalated quickly."
That's really what I didn't like about it. Additionally, I began to think he was recalling years of events possibly and paraphrasing it to the most horrific incident which is why it seemed to jump straight into the barn scene out of nowhere. Although, if it was intended for shock value, mission accomplished.
I up voted on account of the concise writing, easy layout, and good flow.
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Jesus Christ, man, are you insane? *shudders at the mere thought of typing a story on the iPhone*
I specifically halted operations entirely until I could use a computer!
Of course, if you have a PHABLET like the Galaxy Note, then I rescind my statement entirely because that's much easier to compose on.
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Are you writing a fic on a phone?
If yes, you're totally insane, bruh.
If no, you're fine. Probably.
I should warn you that I haven't taken any college classes in Psychology, nor am I a Psychologist, so don't take my words as medical advice.
I should add that I have the first-gen iPhone 4, and typing is a chore beyond belief on it right now. Slo-oooo-oo-ooow. I would stab myself in the eyes if I tried to compose a story on it.
If you have a newer phone, it might not be as traumatic as typing on my phone is.
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Haha! I can assure you, I'm quite sane, maybe.
I have an IPhone 4S and my story Epidemic is doing wonderfully!
I do all the writing on my iPhone, and it's no pain to me. I find it easier than a computer.
Even if I have a computer directly right in room.
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In that case, it's well done. I'm glad I up voted because it was emotion invoking and it did exactly what you intended. As much as I don't want to say this about your truely retched tale, it's very good. Keep it up... I think... I'm so torn on this!
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You're a tougher man than I am. I gave up FIMFic'ing entirely when my CPU burnt to a crisp.
You can't imagine how much I missed being here. It gave me Depression for a week. FiMFic withdrawal?
It also ensured my good behavior because now I'm gonna make damn sure I never get banned ever.
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Well I wouldn't say tougher man. Just more efficient.
A few mistakes here and there, but it held together well, and left just enough to the imagination. Good job.
This is a very good idea, though sad. Nice!
5412744 I know. I'm sorry.
5412786 Sorry is right. Sorry that you didn't write moar.
Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, can we have a sequel were Big Mac tells the whole family
Why does it have the sex tag
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At the time, I was playing on the safe side since that this is one of the very first stories I've written that has ever mentioned rape. But since you've pointed it out, I shall remove it immediately.
This is soooo depressing and possible...it's so effed up yet absolutely plausible. I think this is my new headcanon...
Beautiful. Not only does t feature one of my fave ships, Caramac,I love how all Mac wanted to do was protect his family. But I don't understand why his father raped him if he was mad about his son being gay.
6789565 For two reasons, one of them being what this story is based on a theory the Lizzie Borden ax murders. That being the father had raped his daughters and the mother didn't do a thing to stop it so Lizzie took the ax and chopped them. The other is from all that I've heard from those who are Gay, Lesbian or Bi when after they came out to their families, they were raped to supposedly "cure" them.