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After a visit to Manehatten, Diamond Tiara and her father, Filthy Rich, return home. But when they get off the train, they discover that Ponyville is deserted. And to make matters worse, Filthy Rich goes missing in mere minutes upon arriving home.
What will become of Diamond Tiara as she timidly explores the now abandoned town alone?
... But is she really alone like she thinks she is?
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4916855 Karma's a B**** mon ami.
Looks interesting! That's some classic horror level opening there. Very Silent Hill.
Looking forward to more.
Let's see where this goes...
Not gonna lie, I saw the short description and my first thought was 'is it a "we sent her to summer camp and then moved" fic?'
4916855 At least she can probably spell, you illiterate troll.
4917530 i am no troll you fuckwit illiterate yes but IM NO FUCKING TROLL
4917552 Yes you are, so far you've trolled me, poor old Diamond Tiara and the author of this story with your incoherent drivel. Who deleted your original comment? If it was you, at least you must have SOME sense of how stupid you sounded.
Anyway, on topic... great story so far... looking forward to part two.
4917563 yes i did you are right there you fucking dick naw do the world a faver and die
HA your a fucking dumass your the only person he ever said that to ha you relly pissed him off
4917566 I fact you can call ME a 'dumass' without any trace of irony tells me all I need to know. I'm off now... Have a great day!!
4917568 your a dumass becuse you just made a fucking cerial killer do you even know that ther might be some linitik killers or close to being one that wach mlp coz your talking to one
4917580 I'm sure all the packets of cornflakes and All Bran are quivering in their cardboard containers now. Besides, I'll know when to avoid you... What time does Special Ed classes break for the day?
4917681 hahaha thats funny
Oooohhh I like this! Very Twilight Zone-like. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
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thank you
4917563 Ummm... what happened exactly? I wasn't here when anything happened and I missed his comment before it got deleted
4917795 Oh wow. I would love to see this go along that route. It really DOES seem like it, huh? Though I think Outer Limit deals with more of the monster stuff while Twilight Zone does more of the mind bending moral questioning.
Nice comment. Lets hope the rest follows through!
4918977 Some rubbish about wanting to see Diamond Tiara die in a particularly gruesome way. I usually find people like that have got major issues in real life... they should go and see a good psychiatrist, not take out their latent frustrations on an innocent cartoon character.
4919084 Ohhh umm... ok. So how does that involve trolling you and I? I get the trolling Diamond Tiara part, but us?
4919095 Well. when you call someone a 'fuckwit' and say you're going to kill them, I call that trolling. And leaving such stupid, unproductive, irrelevant comments under your story I would file under a form of trolling too. Obviously a few others agreed with me... that comment was about -10 before it was withdrawn. Anyway, it doesn't really matter... Just keep doing the fine job on the story you have up till now.
4919121 Mmk and thx for the little compliment at the end
4919084 hay i did go see a phychiatrist 3 of them they all said im fine
4919643 You seeing 3 psychiatrists proves to me that you didn't trust the opinion of the first, or the second... so you KNOW there's something wrong upstairs. Besides, I think this is yet another of your little flights of fancy... Next, you'll be telling me you're the President Of The United States. Actually, if George W Bush can do it.........
4919682 it wasint my choes my school made me go see them
4919713 You went to SCHOOL?! Did you spend the entire English period asleep? Just wondering. Regardless, your alleged mental problems are not my concern... so unless you have something exceptional to contribute, I'll say adieu for now...
4919713 hey btw what was your idea for diamond's death in the first place? just curious
4920460 na he only implied that i didint have enything in paticuler
4920483 Mmmk o3o
I get the impression things are only going to get worse from here on in...Diamond Tiara is probably not alone after all. But if she is, then that's sort of equally as terrifying.
Sweet Celestia this comment section is a mess...
Such a tease. I guess this finally sets things up for DT to explore and live life on her own till whatever is snatching ponies reveals itself or just makes her disappear without a trace.
Looking forward to a meaty chapter; because once you pop, you don't stop!
Seems I'm a week late.