Fuck. Known one day as 'Mistress Spectrum'.
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Lord of Chaos, that’s Discord. But what happens when the Lord of Chaos get enough chaos in his eternal life? After the events with Tirek, Discord thinks he does not deserve the friendship and the love of anypony in Equestria. He is tired. Perhaps a Draconequus of Wisdom can help him.
Edited by Exterminate Regenerate, thanks guy!
Cover art by LadyKimba, take with permission.
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You've done it again, big sis. Good on ya.
4861909 Haha, thank you lil' sis!
4861965 Also, check out the latest chapter of you know what.
4861969 I already checked, I just don't let a comment. Let me go there and comment... *walks way to the story*
4861971 Okay.
An excellent piece of work. I do like the way you've somehow condensed a lifetime's conundrum into layman terms and nice, flowing narrative.
4863884 Thanks, was good to write this!
As a writer myself, I am surprised to find that I am unable to praise this story properly. Your writing is excellent, to say the least.
4987737 Wow, thank you! My writing is not excellent, I'm just a humble writer! Anyways, thank you for the compliment!
If I may give some constructive criticism, this story could gain a second draft. An edit or update laying out more detail or development into Discord, his state of mind and more importantly Wise who kinda felt like he popped out of nowhere. What you have is a good first draft that could use some polish and study to finetune it. This story has been organized.
5019229 Thank you for the tip!
When I've time, I'll sure do it! 
Interesting premise. Makes me with if there are other immortals like Wise. A being of Order perhaps named Concord?