Twilight Sparkle is Equestria's newest alicorn princess. She has tremendous new power, a castle, her own kingdom, and all seems right in the world.
But it is not to last. A mysterious stranger appears in Ponyville, and with the power of a black crystal, steals Twilight's magic from her: her alicorn power, her rainbow power, and even her normal unicorn magic is stripped away. Her friends vow to help her get her powers back, but with seemingly no way to restore it on her own, can Twilight cope with the possibility of being forced to live the rest of her life without her magic?
For what is a unicorn, without her magic?
Chapters (2)
Dude, good job. This story is getting me hooked, keep it up and give me more. Thumbs up and a fav
So Twilight and Spike's home has been destroyed yet again... I hope they got nation wide insurance this time.
I didn't read, but I may later. There are several things that can go wrong without her magic. One, say the elements are needed. Two, she can't pick things up with her hooves. Hell, for all we know, magic granted the ponies sapience. Three, she may lose her coloration. Four, she may lose the ability to stand ob two legs, as normal horses would break their legs. That might be magical. Five, you know that cartoon barrier that covers reproductive organs from the public? Toss that out the window. Its gone. She may lose her ability to even see it on other ponies, so yeah. Imagine a dude walks in front of her, and all she's focusing on is his balls. Another, she is magic dependant. So she wont know what to do with herself for at least a month. Hell, she may not even be able to speak for a good bit. Another, she has dead weight wings. Si either they grow super big to fit her body, or they just shrivel up and fall off.
That is only a few of the things that should go wrong. And that would make this a hilarious yet sad story. Any normal unicorn would kill thenself. Hope twilight can get over it.
I have spoken. Peace be with you
Also, remember tirek? She wont be able to even stand properly. Loom at what it did to celestia! She looked ready to pass out! Twilight will also lose her cutie mark, as well as her power.
I'm adding this to blacklights library (my library) for potential.
This is some good progress, more please :)
After Tirek, an artifact like that is belivable.
Some spelling mistakes thacan easily be found during final edits of the story were found. Some he instead of she, not much from what I can see.
I wonder who that stalion is. I wont belive my wildest guess until I know more about him.
Very intriguing concept... and Poor Twilight!
I really hope that you continue this story!
This story is awesome!!
Please continue it, its really good.
I think the stallion who stole Twilight´s power might come to overthrow Celestia and Luna, he might have a dark past and might be a blank flank so he stole her cutie mark and altered it to be his own