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It's June 6th, 1944, the 101st Airborne parachuted into France, beginning one of biggest invasions of human history. After the horrendous drops that took place on the night of the drops, Matthews finds himself alone with only his rifle and what ammo he has left. While lost, he meets up and befriends someone that no one would'v ever expected in a war zone. That certain someone is Twilight Sparkle.

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The fact that all his gear is gone is...interesting.to say the least...

Why is this in Cold War Bronies?

Not a bad start, but could use some improvement.:twilightsmile:

Can I help you with German. Ich kann gut auf Deutsch sprechen. Ich auch schreibe auf Deutsch. It is obvious you do not know German.

Well let's see where it will go. I am watching this mister. :trixieshiftleft:

he he he nice Story so far, Keep going

4917339 sprechen si Deutsch, ya?

4917339 google translate lol
:rainbowwild:

4916876 thats what actually happened during the Normandy airborne drops. Most of soldiers lost alot of their equipment due to it not being attached on correctly.

4917339 but honestly, it would be nice to have someone who speaks actual german to help out.

"Do you anything that's going on right now?"

"Don't just ignore me, I just asking you a question,"

:rainbowhuh: I think you might be missing a few words.

Wow, this got darker than I thought it would quick. Twilight is now helping take back France?

Also, does anyone think she should be a little more affected than she is by all of this?

4920942 yeah, ill go back and proof read it. I sometimes type too fast. Lol

Oh how I can't wait for the liberation of the concentration camps

4922797 sorry to disappoint, but, i don't plan on going that far into the war. But, it is an intresting concept.

4923379 There's always the Ardennes

4923915 again, i don't plan to go to far into the war, not even up to Market Garden

They are GERMAN soldiers.They are in the Weremacht, which belongs TO the Nazi political party, in reality, the only ones committing the mass murder of the Jewish people are the higher ups.Im sorry for the rant, but I just HATE the misconception that all Germans in WWII wanted to kill thousands of people.Sure, SOME did, but that's not the point!Most soldiers were forced into the military....Thank you for your time.

4925959 i understand where your coming from and completely agree. However, I try to portray BOTH sides as ruthless killers, the exception being Twilight. I kinda call this the Call of Duty: World at War approach, where evey soldier is a trained, merciless killer, no matter what side.

4926144 aye, sir. I see what you are doing now.Carry on, good sir. It just bugs me when someone says that all Germans were nazis....Thanks for the quick reply :D

4927209 i had an idea of each pony being part of a different theater of war, like, Twilight and Rainbow Dash would be part of the Red Army, Fluttershy and Rarity part of the SAS, and AJ and Pinkie Pie as the USMC.

4927209 but having six snipers in one company, let alone a platoon? That wouldn't make historical sense. The US usually had one sharpshooter per company. Keep bringing in those suggestions tho.

This chapter, this whole story, is very interesting. Maybe this should be the next Equestria Girls after Rainbow Rocks. Haha, but this is pretty good. Keep it up

4927488 I meant the sniper attack in paris when the allies liberated it. Also there's Cherbourg, Calais, and Antwerp.

4928253 gothca. I greatly appreciate u suggestions, i really do. But, if you read my blog post, you'll see what I'm planning to do with the story

Poor Twilight. Exposed to the Horrors of War. and this is World War II she's in. Not to mention that to my knowledge, mentioning of Omaha and UTah Beaches suggests this skirmish was to prepare for the Normandy Landings.

Then, when twilight gets back to Equestria, she's gonna look like Flutterhulk! :rainbowlaugh:

Everyone: :pinkiegasp::applejackconfused::rainbowderp::duck::fluttershbad:

Twilight: *Deep voice* HEY GUYS....:twilightangry2:

4933507 partly correct my friend. The real assault of the Brecourt Manor was happening during the Normandy landings. What u said was how the airborne drops were supposed to work, but they didn't. They were behind schedule because of the horrendous drops. Don't worry, even though Twilight has seen horrible things, she won't see the destruction of Omaha Beach.

4934945 Good to know. Sorry. My war history isn't that Great, but mention of Beaches made me think of Normandy. Anyway, I can only hope that Twilight can come to understand the Americans' view on why the war is necessary. If anything, my belief, albeit cliched, is that they'll tell her that they signed up to make sure no one else will have to live with the horrors of war, or mention the atrocities the Nazis have committed in the pursuit of Aryan purity

4934976 I'm working on that part right now. You'll see what she does :raritywink:

"Gear up men, weapons and ammo only. We're taking out those guns right now," he shouted.

Brécourt Manor, here we go :ajsmug:

Yay Lt. Winters! :pinkiehappy:

4938481 you'll just have to wait and see to find out if you're right or not...:raritywink:

Hang in there Twi. I'm glad you now understand the reason for this war and its atrocities. YOu're a strong willed mare, you'll pull through.

What is this a crossover of? Will Twilight be badass in this story?

4939305 I suppose he means this is a crossover of either WWII,or Band of Brothers.

Also, historically speaking, didn't the 101st airborne take Pegasus Bridge on D-Day? Or was it that they took Point Du Hoc?

4939347 the 101st took the Brecourt manor and later, the town of Carentan. It was the British who took the Pegasus bridge and the Army Rangers who took Pointe du Hoc. All three though were part of Operation Overlord (codename for the Normandy landings), but, they were all preformed by three different divisions

I feel as though the explanation for the war was dumbed down, but then again that is probably appropriate considering who it is being explained to.

4940625 yeah, i didn't want it to be too horrible. I especially didn't want to mention the round up of the jews or concentration camps. I tried to make it seem bit more horrid with the execution part, but then again, it is a bit chiched

4940686 yeah. The explanation was better had the Holocaust not be mentioned. To me, however, that would've ignited the fire within Twilight even more. I fear the final chapter when she returns to Equestria. That trauma would haunt her for a long time

.......I forgot about Carentan......stupid brain

Real good story man; just one thing: Chapter numbering...

Please check it: You have two Chapter 7's and the roman number VX doesn't exist... :rainbowderp:

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