great chapter. just as good as the first.

6112958 thank you

6115030 Alright.

6115262

You have no idea how long I've been waiting to use that clip.

6116411 a couple of days?

6116548

Try a couple of weeks.

6116551 oh damn, well, I'm glad and honored to have been given it.

6116553

Thanks.

6118159 are sure? I'm only asking cause I want to make sure.

It was a good chapter but i have a question
Why people put unnecesry ships? I meam is okay, you like The crack ship of luna and derpy everybody have their crack ship,but do they as a couple have importance to The story?
Because until now i find them as fillers, that their scenes are only to add a hundred of words more.
Till now The only principal characters are discord celestia and The guard

Just ny opinion

6120182 truthfully, I love the pairing of Luna and Derpy so I put it in for two reasons, one was to open it up for them to be in it later chapters or if someone wanted they could expand more on it or I could if chose to. Then there was to show Discord wasn't acting on his own, and so to punish/thank Luna so getting in her business, she puts Luna in Derpy's current dream to push her just like Luna and Discord did for here. At the moment, I'm just spit balling how to continue to the end I want to do, in order to see if it's the ending that will happen.

I'm surprised no one has made a comment about the guard's name.

I'll help you edit if you want.

6127500 I would like that very much. Can I send you Chapter Two now then Chapter Three after it's done?