Trixie has had a hard time living in Ponyville. She's tried her best to fit in, even getting a job at Bon Bon's sweet shop. However it hasn't been easy for the mare, but she has worked hard. But working hard to get ponies to like you is tiring, and in the end Trixie is still feeling lonely. So with Lyra Heartstrings moving out of Bon Bon's house, Trixie thinks that now would be the time to ask her crush and boss out for a date. If only working past the anxiety of simply asking the mare out so soon after Lyra's move out would go away.
Crack-ship that I wrote on a whim. Inspired by and edited by ChaoticLightning. Cover-art picked because it seemed the best fit for this weird ship
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Interesting, Trixie didn't refer to herself in the third pony in that last line. I wonder if that was deliberate. Great story, I loved it, really cute cover art too. I have a bit of a soft spot for Trixie redemption stories, as long as they aren't ridiculously tragic or unbelievable in some other way. This story did it right in my opinion.
And here I was expecting it to end up as Trixie wanting a date.
Wait, I mean like the fruit date.
Consarnit, relaying hope for wordplay makes it hard to avoid wordplay...
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It's only in poorly written fanfics that Trixie constantly uses constant third person.
Watch her original episode again, she swaps between first and third person interchangeably, while mostly using third person while performing and using first person more often while off-stage.
4813453 I am aware of this. I was just pointing out that in this story she seemed to use third person all the time, until that last line. I was just wondering if that was a deliberate move by the author.
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Try reading the fic again, she drops third person more than just the last line
Hmm... not bad. Have a like.
4813969 Darn, yeah missed that, never mind.
Hmm, not bad. I liked Lyra and Bon Bon not actually being a couple, there. Short, but-pardon the pun-sweet.
Cute. Of course, that just puts Trixie's whole effort of buying a house to waste, because now she has to warm her new lover's bed at night
Of course, Bon Bon won't need a trolley anymore now that she has a unicorn around the house for levitation again!