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The Delirium


I've always enjoyed reading other great fan fictions and I've always had great ideas for ones of my own. Now I write to share those ides with every other fan of mlp,

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Celestia claims to be in love with Thunderlane, but Luna does not think it can happen. After the Princess of the Night voices her concerns, she and her sister end up in a huge argument.

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I think this could be a good story, but it's too choppy, short and abrupt, and none of the voices sound right.

Aww, I thought it was a Luna x Thunderlane. Read one once and it worked so well. Will read this later though.

Don't worry Thunderlane she says that to every stallion.

Why did Celestia send Thunderlane to the f
dungeon he didn't even do anything?!

:trollestia: Hypocrisy. One of my favorite forms of comedy.

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