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Blank Slate is just a boring pony. He works a nine-to-five in the office of a marketing company. The only thing off about him is his lack of a Cutie Mark, and that's where his world falls apart for him. He has no purpose, they say. He has no will, they say. He has no drive, no ego, no value, they say.

He intends to fix that.


Hello, this is my first story here. It took me a while to even come up with an idea, so I hope it goes over well. If anybody has any better cover art or would like to make some, I'll give acknowledgements.

If there's anything wrong with the story, please tell me. This includes things like grammar, syntax, and spelling.

If you like the story, please thumb up, it's my motivation for writing. If you did not like the story, then I'm sorry I can't be perfect and please you, but to make this better please tell me what is wrong with the story.

Rated Teen for things that may happen later, but predominantly language. I'm really making this up as I go.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 5 )

If you find anything wrong, please tell me. I don't actually have a proofreader on this, so it's a bit more difficult, but still manageable. It's just a pleasure to be out of the Block, y'know?

His story reminds me of a movie I recently watched "the secret life of Walter Mitty" great movie if it's anything like that I think I'm going to sicearly enjoy this story so keep on writing because you have at least 1 fan of this story wish you good luck

4811904 It's where I got inspiration for sure. It's probably one of my favorite movies of all-time, and this is coming from a guy that generally hates movies. I'm trying to not make an exact pony replica of Walter Mitty, but it'll definitely feature similarities.

Be sure to Favorite the story for updates as they come. Chapters will greatly vary as I am pretty much loaded in my musical and academic studies even now.

4812333 sounds great good luck on the crazy ideas hope their random and "adventitious"

I feel bad for you I'm typing this comment on my phone this very moment it's frusterating but hope you have fun in France good luck as alwase and can't wait for the new chapter

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