After a year on tour, Rarity and Sweetie Belle's brother, Neon Light, comes to live with them in the Crystal Boutique. How will their family bond reappear after a year on tour? Can Neon be the great brother he always wanted to be? And does he feel any guilt for leaving his family for a whole year?
Neon Light: A character I personally thought of, but has the same name as a character by Shady Vox
Although this story focuses mainly on Rarity, Sweetie Belle, and Neon Light, many other ponies will appear in cameos.
Chapters (7)
actually neon light is already the name of a background pony....
4810909 Technically, the name is Neon Lights, but you have a point there. Neon Lights is a background pony that was voiced by Shady Vox.
Breaking up the two flashbacks seemed unnecessary was there a reason for that?
Aside from neon light already existing, all it needs is editing, and some work on flow of story. Good concept though. Fav and Follow.
The end, whoa.
Interesting story. I think this story was nice to read. May be been improved if more detail and major plot twists were added. Thanks for the OC Neon Lights. I think that is a good brother for Rarity and Sweetiebelle.