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Slywolf930


Every antagonist is the protagonist of their own story.

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Jeff was having a bad day, and Discord offers a solution. Celestia gets involved too. Many people can wish to go to Equestria. Few get the chance. Jeff has a chance. A Once in a Lifetime: Chance.

Tell me what you think!
Edit: I drew a thing.

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Comments ( 7 )

I actually like the song.

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Darude- Sandstorm
(Lol, not really)
I made the song up myself. I can't have copyrighted lyrics and i wanted to set some kind of tone for the rest of the story.

Wow, this is the first where the human ACTUALLY reject equestria, is this really no way to change his mind? Maybe if he is close to death, or Discord trick him into going pulling the 'lets make a deal' like he agree to go to Equestria IF Discord save someones life that is in peril, coming with an excuse like 'I can't brink people that are dyeing or something like that.

What I'm saying is…why not continue it?

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I made the story to be: IF I had a choice, I wouldn't want to go and ruin something that was already perfect. When I read a story about someone or something going to equestria, it always comes to mind that they changed something 'perfect' and it won't be the same.

On the topic of continuing, I thought about it. I have a lot planned already for some HiE fics, and I decided I didn't want another one that I couldn't really work with. I think the message would have been smudged if I lengthened it, and in the end I'm going to leave it as a short. Who knows, I might change my mind one day and make a sequel.

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