He never did go to the hospital to verify if his bones had healed. Sounds rather stupid for a 49 year old man who just got his shin broken. Also, the characters come off as shallow. Milky sleeps with him just because he flatters her? He bedded 2 mares and did a ton of foreplay with other mares? And then there's the whole portrayal of Rarity's character. Her being a serial killer doesn't really fit with the tone of the story, nor does it portray Rarity with a serial killer's psyche. I'll keep reading, but as a story, this is rather unsatisfying.
He never did go to the hospital to verify if his bones had healed. Sounds rather stupid for a 49 year old man who just got his shin broken. Also, the characters come off as shallow. Milky sleeps with him just because he flatters her? He bedded 2 mares and did a ton of foreplay with other mares? And then there's the whole portrayal of Rarity's character. Her being a serial killer doesn't really fit with the tone of the story, nor does it portray Rarity with a serial killer's psyche. I'll keep reading, but as a story, this is rather unsatisfying.