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A reasonable ending in a 'Applejack in Heat' fic?
Take my fav and upvote.
Wheres a male anon when u need one aj.
Wow... that ending...
You surprised me... pleasantly. I liked this.
Bless this fic
No means no, AJ.
Poor AJ. If I were Macintosh, I'd be going out the window, but I'd be back with help (like Twilight or Rainbow) as soon as I could.
Also
Just to let you know, there's no actual heat or swelling in a mare in heat. In fact, it simply means they smell and act ready to mate. She would in fact raise her tail, flirt with stallions and exhibit signs of aggression towards mares that aren't in heat. I suppose that since these are intelligent ponies, one could force themselves into unnatural behavior, like tucking her tail, or him telling her no, but just sayin. So thumbs up.
Need to work on your paragraph formatting.
Okay so im about to read this all i looked for was "Romnace" and fpur fuckin heat stories IN A FUCKIN ROW appear.... Thank the lord...
Well this was... FUCKIN AWESOME (But those paragraphs need to be redone)
A little predictable, but it was still amusing to read.
And we all know what happens next
"And you thought you'd see some clop. Fool."
And that's Big Mac knew, he fucked up.
Trololololol.
Man this has a lot of downvotes. It really doesn't deserve them. The best joke is the one played on the reader.
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Nope.
4921912 What specifically about the formatting needs work? I'd like to fix it if I can.
DENIED!
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I think what he was suggesting was putting a full line between every paragraph, like I do with my stories.
See, for example: this.
Basically, the idea is that by putting that white space in-between paragraphs it is easier to read.
Ahahaha
4924057
As shown my in bold, you need to space out your paragraphs more. Usually, I hit the enter key-
-twice.(as shown) So that I make sure each paragraph is separate from the next.
Damn! Trolled with a kick!
These lines sound very sensual. Not sure if that was intentional, good job anyway.
Everyone on this side of the Fourth Wall has. And if she were a stallion, you would buck him senseless right here, right now. Remember, you are going to remember this later and will never forget how attractive Twilight is.
Rarity approves of Applejack clopping.
Is she worried about being naked? What, does she not have her hat on?
Aww,beaver dammed!
DAT CHAPTER NAME DOOOOOOOEEEEE!
You tease.... and I mean that in a good way. (mostly)
Still can't help but wonder if Applejack takes "Nnope!" for an answer. Eh...she probably would....she's got "toys".
Reads Mac's response.
"Onward to chapter two..."
No chapter two.
Story Status: Complete.
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4924057 plz finshe it
Its not ogre
Its never ogre
And then he promptly turned around, opened the door, closed it behind him, walked calmly into his room and took exorbitant amounts of nondescript pills to help bleach his brain of this most traumatizing memory. In the morning all he'll ever remember was riding that purple narwhal across the gelatinous green skies of Kategjarn and defeating the Spaghetti Womna with the power of 80's rock.
ah man, it was just about to get good
Subtle. Yeah, okay. Sure.
Huh. Not what I expected. Thumbs up and fave for this. : P
just another worthless troll fic
The hell? I just got trolled?!
Damn you! 
Good fic but the way you arranged irks me a tad bit.
Lmao nope!! Classic Mac
awesome story! i love the description! that was a good trollfic
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This reply is so late it's humiliating, but I thought I'd comment on the arrangement. This was originally intended to be a full-on clopfic, but I wasn't sure how to transition into the steamy stuff--so I took the easy way out. Hence the sequencing.
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Do it Do it Do it DO IT!
All trolls aside, you must do it comrade.
Applejack won't take nope for a answer