Blackjack, an incompetent security mare from the dystopian Stable 99, suddenly has her monotonous life turned upside down when the stable is invaded by vicious raiders. Blackjack flees the stable with EC-1101, with the wasteland in hot pursuit.
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Just a few things:
First. I know Fallout 4 arrives about a week from right now, but I wonder if we can have an epic boss fight like that Ultra Sentinal.
Second. Yes Blackjack, the Stable Dweller has days like this to. Just not nearly as bad.
Third. Well, look at it this way Glory. With Rainbow Dash's body and your brain you can probably figure out how to do a sonic rainboom even faster than she did. Silver linings and all that.
Fourth. About the footnote. Yes, I really think I do.
Good lord Somber, you and your long ass chapters remind me of Ri2
Awesome job on this!
Man oh man, I freaking love Boo, she's so cute
Nice job, nice job!
So that is why Unity can't stand it.
When did Psychoshy change colors?
Channeling Dues I see.
Looks like P-21 is taking the mantel of Captain Obvious.
Blackjack needs to learn then to stop digging.
BJ covered a lot of ground.
No wonder I have seen so much DiscordxCelestia and DiscordxTwilight.
Follow through with the meat grinder bet?
Everypony wants to fuck Rainbow Dash, that is a given.
Glory loses her cool.
6597434 The orange mare was Sunflower. Contextual ambiguity aside, Whisper/Psychoshy isn't really the sobbing type.
Oh my gosh did you just.. and with Spirit of Chaos.. dem references.
Oh come now, Blackjack is only like "IWTCIRD" where RD is really Glory. No brainer there.
Oh god, poor Glory! And poor Sanguine... I hate his rotting guts but... Damn...
Who else cried JUST a little when he lost his family?
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Definitely. Everyone's at least a little Rainbowsexual!
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Remember; it's not a rainbow if it doesn't reach six colors.
Why this does not make everyone in the room piss themselves in terror is beyond me.
I hereby rescind any criticism focused on you trying to outdo Fallout: Equestria in any way, shape or form, because that's what I've been trying to do since before I finished reading the damn thing. :B
So the mysteries surrounding the Dealer and Goldenblood continue to engross. I'm certain GB's got to be related to the Thing in the Core somehow, possibly the thing trying to counteract it. (Also, what happened to Horse?) Granted, I originally thought that he was gonna be the guy Sanguine was working for and thus the "real" villain of this piece, but that turned out to be Red Eye I guess and that's kind of disappointing. Oh well. :B As for the bony bastard, it almost makes me want to go back and reread every scene he appears in, with an eye toward him having agency and an agenda.
I'm very miffed by the presence of Discord, but at least you made the right choice in explaining why he doesn't kill. Hooray for non-grimdark Discord!
Oh yeah, wtf was up with Glory dropping a crate on Sanguine in the last chapter? I'd thought that meant she'd come back early for some reason, but that never amounted to anything and was just confusing. Was it supposed to be her sister?
I like that the afterlife scenario we saw at the start of this book was more than just nice scenery. It's like, the entire backbone of this story's magic system, and that's pretty cool.
Kinda saw the end coming for Sanguine there. Once his family got out, they were vulnerable. I like that he went more or less feral at the end. Really should have Psycho to die with him, though. :V
Other than that, all I have to add is don't tease me with awesome things like P-21 in power armor, and who the heck is Crumpets again? <.< I thought that was the name of the one Ranger who like, got his dick raped off or something. Or was that Turnips? That was two books ago, how am I supposed to keep track of this stuff? D:
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Who are you, what changeling clan did you come from, and what did you do with PresentPerfect? Oh, I know, you're a synth that's been sent by the Institute of Fallout Equestria Fanfics to replace you. Now I must ponder Changeling/Synths in a Fallout 4: Equestia setting.
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If I ever write my 'serious' FoE sidefic, you'll see what I mean. :B I mean, the one I did write already opens with a scene of a filly being raped, but that wasn't so much "outdo" as "you can't have FoE without rape". <.<
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Uuuuuh.
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Is that really so bad? But I guess I shouldn't be talking, since the same thing's kind of happened with me, and I didn't want it to. But as far as holding on to old grudges with Homage goes, I'll always have FoE. I find I can't easily say she's my least favorite character from it, though, especially not far and away. Her worst-ness is balanced by the much higher Velvet-per-page ratio, and it makes the comparison harder.
And yeah, that bit was something that took an element that I generally found distasteful and used it in a way that really worked. Probably in large part because Blackjack was a target that made it actually feel more like playing and less like abuse.
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Pretty sure it wasn't her, but Psychoshy. Blackjack seems not to have noticed she'd taken off, but she landed by them right after, where at the start of the conversation Sanguine had pulled her behind cover with him. I think Blackjack just jumped to a conclusion, probably based on that being who would normally do that with her regular crew and some wishful thinking.
I have real sympathy for you on the keeping characters straight issue. If you want some help, feel okay risking spoilers (I think they should be mostly hidden or in the K/"Role/Relationships" column and farther right), and don't mind using a cheat sheet rather than sticking to the story itself, this spreadsheet might do the trick for the basics. Probably wouldn't suffice at the level of detail this question got to, though. Anyway. Crumpets was one of the Steel Rangers who came with Stronghoof from Trottingham. Good memory on Turnip: he was a local who'd been captured and kept by the Flash Fillies. When they met, his assessment of the situation was that "[he was] fine here" before being told by his rescuers he was about to be thrown to the rest of the Flashers, then killed. He got out fine, and even put in a good word on BJ etc.'s behalf with the Rangers under Stronghoof during the Ranger/Reaper battle.
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I've had my suspicions myself . . . but I've received word that much like someone else, he is Not A Changeling. Word's still out on synth, though. Besides, it's far from unheard of for people who didn't like FoE to end up wanting to work with the setting. For example, another negative FoE liveblogger.
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Sigh. Now you've got me thinking along lines that just lead nowhere good: uselessly coining terms (and verbing words, at that). So . . .
"FoE"/"FoE-ed":
GreatAwful euphemism for rape, orgreatestworst euphemism for rape? <.<7148196
Wow, dat spreadsheet @_@
Discord you magnificent son of bitch.
7155739 Yay super discord
I have a feeling this perk is useless. Either that or it's the god of all perks.
Damn, that's some pretty impressive stuff to make me actually give a shit about Sanguine. Gotta admit though, what happened is a pretty surefire way of making you give up on life in every single way imaginable. I just hope it was quick for the bastard. On a related note though, that Ultra Sentry? What in the hell is with that thing? I guess it earns its name in this chapter. And Boo is just... adorable. Beyond adorable. Now I just have to wait for her to die a horrible death, just like everything else we care about.
~SolidFire
Damn, Discord. You rock.
if only the Ministry Mares had all been alive along with both princesses. they honestly would of been proud of Discord i bet.
also. fricking. amazing. chapter.
6605514 i definitely did on internally.
*Realizes that if chapters 35-39 were all one, it would be about 113,000 words long, a.k.a. longer than a lot of books*
I was EXTREMELY worried that Fluttershy would die in this chapter. She's my favorite side character, and I would be completely distraught to see her go. :(
7793596 Wowie! Thanks for doing a rough addition, I really didn't want to go back to the main page to see how long it would have been. It can't be to bad. Having the chapter be that long, though, it would take a
littlelot longer to get through.And on the note of reading length, I have been taking far to long to read this. I should be at about a month and a half now. It might be understandable, since, I have been reading 1-4 chapters every few days. Huh. I need to focus on my own writing(if I had a schedule I would be behind), I would love to
actually finishsomething.Well now I really want to know what Kissed by Discord is...
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Think of it as a massive luck boost in most situations and if a certain point is reached it can be replaced by an endgame class perk(level 30-50 requirement perk gained at a lower level or without all requirements met, look for particularly powerful perks mentioning chaos)
Congratulations, Ponokeo.
Have some laser death rays for your trouble.
8060487 or do what I did and say it's the wild wasteland trait
So to recap:
Blackjack looks like the terminator.
Blackjack is now dating smart Rainbow Dash.
Blackjack now has a draconeques crushing on her.
Blackjack can see ghosts. And they sometimes see her.
... I'm not questioning any of it.
oh...in the original FoE, Littlepip found out that Fluttershy herself had given them to the Zebras, thinking that the threat of "mutually assured destruction" would end the war...
The Protectapony sparked and flashed, then looked around. It touched a hoof to its cheek. “My goodness! I have suddenly achieved sentience! I have hopes! Dreams! A destiny!”
The other two robotic ponies turned towards the dosed machine. “Error!” And then they proceeded to hose it down with their scarlet beams
This has officially gone into anime levels of insanity as well as a new bar for confusion
I LOVE IT!
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Jeez that really puts the length into perspective. I find it insane that anyone can write a story as long as Project Horizons.
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Haha, if you think this crazy long, take a look at this: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/45860/diaries-of-a-madman. It’s not even complete yet, but I think I like this one more
Congrats, that statement was false.
What just happened?
Sumo Discord? I salute you Somber.
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Wait correct me if I'm wrong but didn't she give it to them to help them heal themselves as well, bit for mutually assured destruction
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No it was too force both sides into a stalemate because they both had weapons so powerful both sides would lose. But it failed because of how intense the situation was and ended up ending the world. Basically flutter shy is the only reason the ponies didn't win the war and the equestrian wasteland was created. Crazy stuff applesnack. Crazy stuff.
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I believe that was a reference to old world blues (fallout new vegas) when you make a sentient robo brain.
Damn, wanted to know what that quest perk was.
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That wasn't it. Though that's probably how it would have gone in real life.
Her aim was literally to simply make war pointless by making both sides unable to die; both sides having mega-spell healing that nullified battles. She didn't account for the re-engineering of her mega spell to be used with offensive spells - essentially upgrading weapons from guns and bullets to nuclear arsenals.
Fucking Atom Smasher doesn't have days like you Blackjack. That's just impressive.
I love just how absurd PH gets it really embraces how much of a mad world this is. Also the ultra sentinel I think is my favorite enemy in this story, or at least one of them. I just love how unstoppable it was it’s just one of those things you send when you need ever last motherfucker dead.
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Is it weird that I wanted sanguine to get his family safely and live happily ever after?
Never thought I'd shed tears over Sanguine dying.
Well played Somber you magnificent bastard.
Then what the fuck are you???
I hope she can regenerate it
I don't think you'll have any left